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2019-06-01 23:59

Overall, I'd say this is a pretty cute and funny story. The plot is fine, a big part in it plays the shop, which I think is made pretty nice. Overall world building is done properly, so you've got a sense of what's going on. Stability of updates is pretty good as well. The only downside to the novel would be writing quality, with some mistakes here and there, but it's readable.

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Thanks for the review :)

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