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Cliff_Sect_Leader
Cliff_Sect_LeaderLv65yr
2019-06-09 23:39

I've only read the first 10 chapters so I don 't really have much to say at this point. The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead. The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.

Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)

TrinityShock
4.7
129 Chs

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TrinityShock
TrinityShockAuthor

I'm so sorry that you didn't like it.. I'm really bad at making the motivations to move the story along, as i don't have any experience in writing.. (tbh i'm scared to think about the future)

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MadReader
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I gave 5 stars... Not because I've read the story... No... Grandpa gave five stars because I trust the previous review's comment and I believe he was an honest person... Anyway... Good job!

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bayu_toya
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This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novel And lastly... Keep the good work, author. Selama tulisannya bagus, akan selalu ku ikuti ceritanya 👍

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SovietDoge
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I gave five stars because I trust the person who reviewed like the person below me 10100011101011101010101110101011001010101010101010010101010010101010101010101000010111010101010100101010

5yr
aSleepyPenguin
aSleepyPenguinLv5

I'm betting this will go Premium :| I'm stating this now while not many people know yet. Is anyone willing to take the bet? 140 Words huh, well then. I'm scared of primuem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

5yr
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Reveal spoiler

5yr
MistahChu
MistahChuLv2

I liked this story.. Please continue to write them!!! What i like from this novel is: 1. The minecraft portal and the items that you could by from the shop. It's literally all thing that existed inside real world, games, movies and even anime. 2. When you can't upload, you said it first. Not like other novels, who suddenly didn't upload. Well.. in other words, you did a great job! (P.S. could you add some potions from Harry Potter too?)

5yr
the_accountant
the_accountantLv1

pls update the story is amazing ...............................................................................................................

1yr
Peachwoodgirl6
Peachwoodgirl6Lv5

I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.

5yr
bennylin
bennylinLv4

Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.

5yr
koolsalad
koolsaladLv12

Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.

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