The english is readable but there is still a big room for imptovement. New world as far as it seems so gotta see how it develops but it seems based on a cultivation background. To the characters weeell... mcs IQ is probably below the roomtemperatur in an arctic enviroment π lets leave it with that statement
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Ahaha.. well.. thank you for your review.. I just hope you understand that english isn't my first language, so that's why it's like that LOL
Yeah i understand π its just a rough estimate from my point of view :D u still have some grammarmistakes but not so bad that people cant really read it. For most original storys ur english quality is in the upper half or more but still a lot room to grow if u want to. I rarely give really high english stars cause i try to evaluate it fairly and neutral from my point of view π€
TrinityShock:Ahaha.. well.. thank you for your review.. I just hope you understand that english isn't my first language, so that's why it's like that LOL
Thank you for trying to read my novel btw.. ππ
Bierbart:Yeah i understand π its just a rough estimate from my point of view :D u still have some grammarmistakes but not so bad that people cant really read it. For most original storys ur english quality is in the upper half or more but still a lot room to grow if u want to. I rarely give really high english stars cause i try to evaluate it fairly and neutral from my point of view π€
Will probably read it further and then change part of the review π u sucessfully included comedy. But the mcs intellect kinda makes me personally cringe reaaally hard π i am currently like chapter 8. Thats why character and world is so low π not much info about that till there except a bit of standart cultivation mesh π buuut u can read it and get a laugh from time to time so why drop it early kinda. I think u know what i mean with that π already found storys which were unreadable grammarwise but after some time it got better so welp π dunno if u get my viewpoint with a story can still change a lot especially if the author writes for fun and practice
TrinityShock:Thank you for trying to read my novel btw.. ππ
LMAO ππ I'll try to raise my MC's IQ then.. And i always thought that my comedy was too corny and not funny, as only a few of the reader commented on them XD
Bierbart:Will probably read it further and then change part of the review π u sucessfully included comedy. But the mcs intellect kinda makes me personally cringe reaaally hard π i am currently like chapter 8. Thats why character and world is so low π not much info about that till there except a bit of standart cultivation mesh π buuut u can read it and get a laugh from time to time so why drop it early kinda. I think u know what i mean with that π already found storys which were unreadable grammarwise but after some time it got better so welp π dunno if u get my viewpoint with a story can still change a lot especially if the author writes for fun and practice
I just want to ask one thing will he be op or nah
TrinityShock:LMAO ππ I'll try to raise my MC's IQ then.. And i always thought that my comedy was too corny and not funny, as only a few of the reader commented on them XD
