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My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

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Victor was a normal 21-year-old man, he grew up in a loving family that helped him take care of himself knowing that he had a practically incurable disease, the RH null blood, he was the owner of a rare blood type... But what Victor didn't know, is that this blood type was a delicacy in the supernatural world, creatures that fed on blood loved his blood type... And that blood he hated would be the factor that would make Victor the greatest vampire of all time. ........................... [A/N: The cover is mine, it's original.] This novel is being edited by: IsUnavailable, And Davo 2138. If you want to support me so that I can pay artists to illustrate the characters in my novel, visit my Patreon: patreon.com/VictorWeismann More characters images in: https://discord.gg/4FETZAf

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Chapter 1Chapter 01: Prologue

[A/N: Before you start reading, please understand that this is a fiction, anything resembling the real world is a mere coincidence, I have no intention of offending any kind of group, this is just a fiction!]

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I open my eyes, seeing a familiar ceiling, and turn my face to look at my computer that was on my personal desk, "When did I get home?" rising from my bed I start to think. My memories were scrambled and I couldn't remember anything...

"Victor!!" Suddenly I hear a woman's voice. It was an angelic voice, a wonderfully beautiful voice; and she sounded very worried.

"Ugh... Who?" I put a hand to my head when I feel it start hurting badly.

I lean on the bed and try to get up, but all of a sudden I feel my hand sinking into the material of the bed. I hear the noise of wood breaking and look in the direction of my hand; I see that my hand has gone through the mattress and broke the wood that supports my bed...

I quickly pulled my hand away and I looked, confused, at my mattress that had a hole in it "What's wrong with me?" I asked aloud, stunned.

I don't remember being so strong; did something happen to me? I start to question myself, and I try to search my memory. But, even though I try to search my memory, I can't find it; it's like something is blocking my memories.

I try to form a coherent train of thought as if I'm putting together a puzzle, "Let's start at the beginning, I went to the grocery store to buy the food my mom ordered, but..."

I try to continue to form a timeline with my memories, but I don't have time for that when I feel unbearable thirst in my throat. It was like I ran a marathon and needed a drink of water! My throat was parched!

I quickly get up, ignoring the sounds of wood creaking from the floor and grab my bathroom door handle, attempting to open the door, but something amazing happens...

The door is literally ripped off the wall. I was shocked at this show of force but I don't have time to admire it, or even question how I was able to do it. I quickly walk into the bathroom and try to turn on the water tap.

As before, the tap broke when I tried to open it and the water started to spew out; I ignored it, and put my mouth into the water trying to drink as much as possible. I looked like a man who was lost in the desert and found an oasis for the first time in days.

I feel the cold water from the tap entering my mouth and seeping down my throat, but the water doesn't seem to satisfy me; I needed more. I needed something to satisfy my thirst, the water didn't seem to be working.

"Calm down," I hear a woman's voice, it was the same voice that called my name when I woke up.

Suddenly, as if it were a misleading lie, the thirst I had been feeling earlier disappeared.

I fall to the ground and start to inhale and breathe heavily, "Who's there?" I asked out loud, but I didn't hear an answer. I take a deep breath and sigh, "Just what in the name of God is happening?"

I look at the overflowing water and realize I couldn't leave it like this. I carefully turned off another valve that was located near the floor and soon the water stopped pouring.

I sigh in relief and get up off the floor. I turn to look at myself in the mirror, and what I see surprises me: "Is that … me?"

I look a little taller, I have a well defined body with muscles in the right places, six-pack abs and muscular arms. What stood out the most in my appearance is the incredibly pale skin, it's like I'm missing most of the blood in my body. I used to look like a dead creature from a disease that gave me anemia, an extremely inconvenient disease and in some cases deadly... But, this is another level... I look like I don't have any blood in my body, I also noticed that my face is more defined; and my blue eyes and black hair have gained more shine?

Did the former 21-year-old who was skinny and looked like a teenager, grow up to be an athletic looking man in just one night? What happened? Was I kidnapped by the government and drafted into the super soldier program?

"Victor, what's going on? Why all the noise?" I look towards where I hear another voice and I start to breathe heavily; my throat starts to get thirsty again. I look through the wall and see the image of a human, and I can see her heart beating in a very attractive rhythm...

I could see the person's entire body with a red vision, it was like the world around me had changed; and I could see the heart that was glowing a more vibrant red. It was like it was inviting me to rip it out ... and drink it.

"Victor? What's happening? What was that noise?" Hearing my mother's voice, I woke up from my inebriated state.

"M-Mother...?" I responded in the most normal voice I could muster; but, it was obvious that I failed.

"Victor!? Open the door, what's going on?" I look at my reflection in the mirror and notice that my eyes have changed to blood red.

"Oh... Shit."

Realizing what happened to me changed me in many different ways, I started to think rationally. I try with all my strength to resist the temptation to leave the room and rip my mother's heart out.

First, I must calm my mother down and get her out of here.

"Mom, I'm busy right now."

Realizing I was speaking normally again, she visibly calms; at least that's what my new red vision implies. I can't see her expression but I can see her heart beating at a slower pace.

"Can you open the door?"

"I can't…I'm not wearing clothes right now", I said in an uncomfortable voice.

"Oh," She suddenly turns and starts heading towards the stairs. I was confused for a moment, why did she give up so easily?

"Make sure you take out your trash; I don't want to clean your fluids, that's your girlfriend's job. If you have one of course."

Oof, I feel an arrow in my chest for some reason but, strangely, it helped me calm down. I grow a little smile; my mother has no mercy and speaks her mind, she's very honest. That's the quality I like most about her. Though, I won't deny that I am often irritated with her honesty; but living 21 years of my life under her roof, you get used to it.

Anyway, I look at the clock and see that it's morning. I need to go to college, but I don't think I'm able to go out on the street right now, and...

I look at my room and see the mess I made, the floor was broken, the door was ripped out, the bathroom was flooded... "I need to organize this mess"

...

Two hours later.

When tidying my room, I found out several things about my new self. I had more strength, much more strength than I had previously.

Because of this change, I'm having trouble controlling myself. Before I used X force and I could open my bedroom door without breaking anything, but if I use the same force now, the bedroom door will literally be ripped off the wall.

My senses like hearing, smelling, sight, etc. They're much more sensitive, my hearing isn't on the level of the comic book scout friend who wears blue and red and has the S symbol on his chest; that guy could hear the entire planet...

As far as I've tested, I can hear everything that's going on in my house and in the surrounding neighborhood. It's annoying, I hear multiple voices at the same time and I can't discern who's who.

Because of that, I tried something. I focused all my attention on a porn video that I opened on my computer called 'The hardest game in the world'.

Do I look stupid? Yes, but it worked. Men are easy creatures to grab attention from.

My sense of smell has also improved, but the only thing I can smell from several kilometers away is blood, I can't differentiate the scents either.

Another thing I learned is that I have another kind of vision. When I switch to this vision, the world turns red and I can see everything around as if there were no walls. And, in this world, I can see human silhouettes. When I focus on these beings, I can see their hearts glowing bright red.

I just tested this for a few seconds; I don't want to risk getting thirsty again.

And yes... I know shit happened to me... I became a vampire, or something like a vampire...

The features are very obvious, pale skin, red eyes, better physical conditioning, and an insatiable thirst...

Knowing this, I have a starting line in my reasoning.

First, let's see what weaknesses I have.

The most obvious weaknesses from vampire books are garlic, the cross of Jesus (or something related to god), sunlight, and I can't enter someone's house uninvited. Also ... running water?

Some weaknesses may seem stupid, but I need to test them all. First the cross of Jesus. I look at a necklace that is hanging on my computer screen, on that necklace there is a cross; I slowly touch the necklace and I feel ... nothing.

Hmm, next. Running water... Well, I drank tap water, I guess that counts as a no? I don't know. I need to go to a pool or river that has running water and test; let's leave this weakness for another time.

Next on the list is garlic, I remember I bought garlic pizza two days ago. I walk towards the small fridge in my room and pick up the garlic pizza I had bought. Smelling the pizza with my nose, I feel like throwing up, but I also don't feel anything else; like a sudden weakness or something.

I think the urge to vomit was because my appetite changed? I try to put the pizza in my mouth and as expected, my body instantly rejects the food.

I ran towards the bathroom and spit the pizza into the toilet.

"How disgusting," I said with a nauseous face, "Why do I feel like I've eaten an out-of-date fish?"

My stomach churns, and I feel like throwing up. I quickly started to inhale and take deep breaths, a few minutes later repeating this process, the urge to vomit passed.

In the future, I must test whether whole garlic has any effect on me. Thinking about it now, that was stupid... What kind of vampire would have weakness to garlic pizza?

Anyway, the next weakness is the sun...

I walk towards my bedroom window, which is located on the wall where my bed is positioned; I climb onto my bed and open a small gap in the curtain for the sunlight to enter.

I swallow my saliva, I am a little scared of disappearing. After all, the biggest weakness of vampires is sunlight, but, I need to know; and I think just putting my finger in the sun shouldn't cause any problems, right?

Slowly, I bring my finger closer to the sunlight. When there was only 1CM left until sunlight touched my finger, I stopped... No, I need to know; don't be a chicken, Victor!

I put my finger in the sunlight and... nothing happens. I don't feel my finger disappear, and I don't feel that intense pain that I expected...

I sigh in relief, I look at my window curtain and open it. As soon as the sunlight enters my room, I feel the sun bathing me in warmth and touching my entire body; yet, I feel nothing.

For some reason, I felt like I should praise the sun right now, but I'm not going to do that. What if someone saw me?

I lie down on the bed and look up at the ceiling. "With no other obvious vampire weaknesses, I don't want to try to decapitate myself or rip my heart out; I'm not crazy enough for that."

"... What am I?" I say to myself out loud. This morning was weird. For some reason, I don't remember what happened yesterday and I woke up with the characteristics of a vampire. But, I also didn't have the obvious weaknesses of a vampire... Am I reading too many books?

"But, Hey, at least I don't glow in the sunlight." I laugh at my own lame joke. I close my eyes, and slowly, I drift off to sleep.

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :The Awakening.
Volume 2 :Vampire Society.
Volume 3 :A New Pillar.
Volume 4 :Discoveries, Changes, And War.
Volume 5 :Demonic War.
Volume 6 :King among Kings.
Volume 7 :Dragon God of Chaos.
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Dav0_2138Lv15

Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?

IsekaiHentaiKakeru
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Nanaya_The_Snake
Nanaya_The_SnakeLv3

This novel is so good that i just had to make a review. I must say this is straight up deserves to be in the top ranking in wn both in golden tix and power stone. This novel has so many highs through out the novel. Some notable ones which i could remember on top of my head are the church ma*acre arc, japanese genocide arc, first supernatural meeting, the three wives vs pillar demons, vic vs entire biblical hel (special mention to vic vs horseman war), vic vs fenrir fight, then vic vs three primordial gods (and 2 god-kings) and currently the second meeting which is ongoing. in just 871 it has so much peak which can't even be compare to some of the novels with 2000 chapters. for that i must commend you author. Your fillers vs hype moments is very well done. Specially if you are reading all this in one go. You will see just how great the pacing and story for the novel is. Now some of the issues i had while reading the novel i will list them as well, it's fair that i praise the novel so i should also bring out it's short coming (though these short coming; most of them are very easy to fix as the story goes on). 1) victor's growth: as much as it is very well done and everything makes sense, but his power in itself leaves a lot to the speculation of the readers, not having a concrete power structure and not knowing what victor or his enemies are capable of does put a lot of things in the air and sometime it feels like maive a pull, like the fight with the 3 primordial gods (logic made sense of the gods not using their true form in that fight while fighting vic and showing vic evolved, all of that makes sense, but we do not even know how strong true form 'primordial gods' are, what we know is they are weaker then mc who fought them while he was 'god king' power, you get what i mean right. no where in the novel we have been given a 'definite' power structure which makes no sense at all. (i will get to that chapter 0 in a moment). I will be honest, i am a very big fan of planetary, galactic, universal and multiversal level of fights and i am seeing this novel going in that direction which is a ma**ive plus. This allows you to being 'outerverse gods' who should be astronomically stronger then whatever gods are in the 'backwater cosmos' (i believe we were told this for earth location) to 'mid region cosmos' but please give us some sort leveling structure or chart to keep tabs on every gods and what type of power scale they would have. (i have seen something like that done on the wiki fandom 'power hierarchy' and victor's 'power level' page, as much as i like it, it says that it's been done as a fan-made stuff so that doesn't really cut it. Till the novel itself validate it. There will be mistakes in that. Well anyways i think you may have some things planned regarding power structure which you could show in the future so i will stop saying more about this issue. 2) (a) harem: i love big harems specially when mc is not a simp and gets 'undeserved' love from fmcs and those 'cold shoulder' giving fmcs do not exist in this novel which i truly love about the harem. Now the issue is, with such a big harem it is bound to have screen time issues with the girls. I have seen plenty of novels suffer from this so it is not new, but this novel is just so good that genuine criticism and issues are very 'generic' issues present in all the harem novels. Some wives like victoria, mizuki, siena, lacus, eve/alter eve(surprisingly she is probably the least of the maids to get screen time), rose, eleonor, haruna (her presence in the novel in terms of wife is on the weaker side), demon generals like vine, vepar, helena, lily even though there work itself forces them to be in hel* and manage things there but this doesn't change the fact that they feel so extra and (very weak? or just the fights we see in this novel have reached such a point that normally strong beings feel weak). (b) lovers/love interests: with the theme this novel is going with 'emperor' vic and 'empress' violet its already fair to say that the current harem would increase due to victor's personality. characters like natasha (naty), carmila, valeria, maya feels very badly executed, they could be much more but with the novels pacing, their appearance timing makes them feel extremely irrelevant to the story, though i see this can change very easily as faction power matters a lot in wars and they could become strong enough to be considered one of the 'powerhouses' of dragon nest but for now, they feel weak to be worth anything. Also please do something with anna, i personally do not care if she truly leaves leon (as far i remember they didn't had any vampire ritual so they are not married) or stays with leon, but end this mini 'drama-like' arc that's been in background since she transformed into vampire. Even in the 'omake/future' chapter its hinted that anna is still with victor and was still referred as 'mother-in-law' i just don't know what to make of it, whatever you choose, please choose it fast so readers are not being left there hanging for so long. (c) goddesses such as lilith, nyx, gaia, amaterasu, hera, rhea, frigga (maybe in the norse conquest he also gets her?), hela (it's been hinted for a while that he will get the ruler so it is a matter of time), kali (ain't gonna lie i really do want her but idk if you would be fine with those 'religious' people acting like keyboard warriors and keep hara**ing you so i will just leave it to you.), hestia (her case has been dragging on for 200ish chapters, you should really conclude it soon.). 3) general characters: i have noticed this but there is a severe lack of 'strong' and 'competent' male characters ( i do not count genderfluid beings like regulators or end beast). I do not know what you really plan, but this novel could do really well with male characters who could be reoccurring and friends with victor (character like shiva could be great as beauty and charm doesn't really work effectively against him so good friendship could be form with characters like him and those characters should be able to face against victor and could do a 'draw match' though we know victor is stronger then shiva but you get the point, just introduce beings who are on the same level as victor even if they are millions or billions of years older then him but at least the novel shouldn't just be female dominated powerhouses). Though don't get me wrong, i don't want male characters to join victor's dragon nest pantheon but just good friends who could rival each other and force each other to become stronger and stronger 4) usage of words: there is a very very high over usage of words such as 'handsome' and sentences about how victor is this and that, we really don't need to be reminded of how handsome, strong, competent, genius victor is, we know everything, we have been seeing his pov all this time, we know him more then his harem itself knows of him. You should really cut down on same sentences being repeated in every other chapter while stroking victor's naturally big ego. It is very hypocritical that victor says how big gods ego are and all, but next we see his ego is even bigger then all the gods combine, sure victor has the power to have that ego but that doesn't really mean you have to repeat it all the time. 5) retconning information: I have seen a few times that the information which we are told gets thrown out of the window with new info which makes every info-dump that characters give meaningless. prime example would be yggdrasil, she was said to be a neutral tree when Scathach said about her bad personality and she had seen her. then 200~300 chapters later victor says that there is a negative side of the world tree in biblical hel? so the initial a*essment of yggdrasil being neutral tree is wrong. Another being amaterasu and her brothers, initially her brothers, susanoo and tsukiyomi were told to be average gods, but later we are told that amaterasu is a second generation primordial god that would literally mean that her brothers are also the same, so why were they ever called average gods in chapter 0 when victor's power was discussed. Kali case is also super weird like, she was said to be in same level as special being like vlad but then we got told that she is literally the strongest goddess and near the path to become a primordial entity, the information retcons that happen through out the story is not good. Vlad is also has a very funny situation, he was introduced as one of the strongest being and him alone resulted in other pantheons to not attack his faction and was capable of making friends with shiva and limbo, but the more you are shown the more you see how weak mortal factions truly are, witches were always weak, werewolves only had fenrir but otherwise they are weak, vampires had the countesses and vlad but now countesses are in another faction, vlad alone means vampires and werewolves are more or less in same situation. Yokai? well they were introduced as a new faction and they joined victor's faction so they were spared from the start. Eldergods who want to remove vampires from their planet, their god-king is said to be as strong as victor (you said it in a comment but its not said in the novel so i expect a retcon to this anyway), why the fk elder gods couldn't get rid of vlad and his vampire faction before even victor story started? this just makes no sense at all. 6) ranking: i have seen some mentions of top 10 gods and such, but we never really got that list and we genuinely just have no idea how many strong gods and mortals are even in the earth sector and universe. In the initial a**essment on chapter 0 literally all primordial gods (1st and 2nd gen) are ranked 1 which really doesn't help with the understanding of powerful people, through out the novel we are told that power level is not constant, which is nice, but if we do not even have a base concrete standards for power some of these 'generalized gods and beings' have, how can we even imagine what would happen if these two beings fight or who would be able to fight one vs one with victor and such. That part just doesn't exist in this novel. These were some of the points i wanted to bring out and say to you while reading this novel, i see a lot and lot of potential that still hasn't been tapped in this novel and there could be so many plots and arcs that could be explored in the future. Thanks for this amazing novel and keep doing your best with this novel. I love reading this story so much

_yelong
_yelongLv3

This is a really great novel, have been following this since it had around 600~ chapters. The daily wait for one chapter was way too harsh at times. never thought this novel would actually turn me, a manga, manhwa, manhwa enjoyer into reading blocks of text. Before reading mtw, literally never thought i would sit in chair and read a wn as i always thought, there is no way i would enjoy reading text only. but this proved my initial thought wrong. Now i actually like reading novels quite a lot. i have read till the recent chapter 887 as of this review and i must say, the sheer amount of plot progression that happened in one single volume cant be matched to all your previous volumes combined. Vol1 to vol5 is like prep for our mc victor, he was basically a continental level powerhouse near the end of demon wars and in king among kings, he is now at galaxy level which is fkin n*ts. He literally is like a cosmic horror akin to lovecraft works tho obviously if u compare the power, vic is quite significantly weaker then great old ones and such but i can totally see victor surpa** them in power scale as we are barely at vol 7 and i heard there could be 5 or 6 more volumes in plan, if following the same type of progression and cool powerups, vic could very well be the definition of op mc, a true weak to strong then to op mc. also really want to know, just how many volumes are you truly planning as this volume alone has been going for like 6-8 months already, probably the biggest volume for this novel till date. It did give of the feeling that you would end this novel in like next volume or something which i hope isn't true. this probably is my personal opinion, but i think you could try to lower your avg word count per chapter and give us 2 chap a day for a lot more consistency. which would atleast be a good return for the privilege purchase, like the highest priv locks 50 chapters/50 days worth of chapter for 30(31) days. and given your tight schedule, we barely even get 30 chaps a month. could you like lower the priv pruchase for the highest one or just make more chaps to justify the cost. while reading the story, specially in the current 800chap onwards, there is often mentions of 'sectors' 'galaxies' 'universes' and 'cosmos' this novel just makes me confuse as to what scale of things sometime being talked about by the characters. Earth is in milky way galaxy and earth is a mid level sector, so does this sector means that entire galaxy itself is a mid level sector area or a sector means one planet/solar system or multiple galaxies can be equated to one sector. Same confusion with samar and nightingale. gods in this novel are kind of really weak(?) tbh. idk why but aren't gods suppose to be omnipotence and omnipresent beings. but they all do some much dumb decisions, even more idiotic then mortals do from time to time. Clarification of god level is really poorly done, like from what i understood, its basically just primordial entty>primordial god>peak god king>god king>high level battle gods> average gods>low level combat gods>minor gods such as mountain god, etc. It truly feels very barebone. Victor basically already tops the power levels if you just remove regulators, as they are said to be truly infinite power, victor is nowhere near reaching that. There are emperors and overlords, but sometime i dont even understand how powerful they are tbh. All the primordial gods we have seen, no one has ever used their true forms and actually go all out and we dont truly see the scale of destruction being done. Where as if you look at victor, he has so many powers left to be explored and he is already galaxy creator level. We still dont know what his bld dragon exclusive progenitor perks. His concepts which awakened really recently also have a long way to go. He has gained both positive and negative energy sources, he has begin. only thing left form him to access chaos concept should be end only i guess. He also has yet to reach grandmaster and the stage above grandmaster well. so many power ups left. But the character pool of beings who could fight vic and make vic go all out doesn't really exist anymore. We have yet to see foreign entties who could very well face slam earth gods like a joke. that could be entertaining to see, but for now there is no as such character in the story. Velnohra won't be an enemy to vic anyway, so i hope the enemy she has is very very strong for her to go to a mid level sector to ask for help. The harem, please author make dedicated chapters for the girls first time at least, just having it skipped with just one or two lines is so lame, even the big o**y was skipped with some word counts, it is such a big l, big harem should in turn give us more seggs and more threesms and such, it just lacks so much in that department, its so sad. overall till chapter 887, i whole heartedly rec this series to anyone who likes an actual alpha mc and really like big harem in the scale of 30 to 50 harem members with the current pacing.

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