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Primordial_Rapture
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2023-11-10 23:01

This is a really great novel, have been following this since it had around 600~ chapters. The daily wait for one chapter was way too harsh at times. never thought this novel would actually turn me, a manga, manhwa, manhwa enjoyer into reading blocks of text. Before reading mtw, literally never thought i would sit in chair and read a wn as i always thought, there is no way i would enjoy reading text only. but this proved my initial thought wrong. Now i actually like reading novels quite a lot. i have read till the recent chapter 887 as of this review and i must say, the sheer amount of plot progression that happened in one single volume cant be matched to all your previous volumes combined. Vol1 to vol5 is like prep for our mc victor, he was basically a continental level powerhouse near the end of demon wars and in king among kings, he is now at galaxy level which is fkin n*ts. He literally is like a cosmic horror akin to lovecraft works tho obviously if u compare the power, vic is quite significantly weaker then great old ones and such but i can totally see victor surpa** them in power scale as we are barely at vol 7 and i heard there could be 5 or 6 more volumes in plan, if following the same type of progression and cool powerups, vic could very well be the definition of op mc, a true weak to strong then to op mc. also really want to know, just how many volumes are you truly planning as this volume alone has been going for like 6-8 months already, probably the biggest volume for this novel till date. It did give of the feeling that you would end this novel in like next volume or something which i hope isn't true. this probably is my personal opinion, but i think you could try to lower your avg word count per chapter and give us 2 chap a day for a lot more consistency. which would atleast be a good return for the privilege purchase, like the highest priv locks 50 chapters/50 days worth of chapter for 30(31) days. and given your tight schedule, we barely even get 30 chaps a month. could you like lower the priv pruchase for the highest one or just make more chaps to justify the cost. while reading the story, specially in the current 800chap onwards, there is often mentions of 'sectors' 'galaxies' 'universes' and 'cosmos' this novel just makes me confuse as to what scale of things sometime being talked about by the characters. Earth is in milky way galaxy and earth is a mid level sector, so does this sector means that entire galaxy itself is a mid level sector area or a sector means one planet/solar system or multiple galaxies can be equated to one sector. Same confusion with samar and nightingale. gods in this novel are kind of really weak(?) tbh. idk why but aren't gods suppose to be omnipotence and omnipresent beings. but they all do some much dumb decisions, even more idiotic then mortals do from time to time. Clarification of god level is really poorly done, like from what i understood, its basically just primordial entty>primordial god>peak god king>god king>high level battle gods> average gods>low level combat gods>minor gods such as mountain god, etc. It truly feels very barebone. Victor basically already tops the power levels if you just remove regulators, as they are said to be truly infinite power, victor is nowhere near reaching that. There are emperors and overlords, but sometime i dont even understand how powerful they are tbh. All the primordial gods we have seen, no one has ever used their true forms and actually go all out and we dont truly see the scale of destruction being done. Where as if you look at victor, he has so many powers left to be explored and he is already galaxy creator level. We still dont know what his bld dragon exclusive progenitor perks. His concepts which awakened really recently also have a long way to go. He has gained both positive and negative energy sources, he has begin. only thing left form him to access chaos concept should be end only i guess. He also has yet to reach grandmaster and the stage above grandmaster well. so many power ups left. But the character pool of beings who could fight vic and make vic go all out doesn't really exist anymore. We have yet to see foreign entties who could very well face slam earth gods like a joke. that could be entertaining to see, but for now there is no as such character in the story. Velnohra won't be an enemy to vic anyway, so i hope the enemy she has is very very strong for her to go to a mid level sector to ask for help. The harem, please author make dedicated chapters for the girls first time at least, just having it skipped with just one or two lines is so lame, even the big o**y was skipped with some word counts, it is such a big l, big harem should in turn give us more seggs and more threesms and such, it just lacks so much in that department, its so sad. overall till chapter 887, i whole heartedly rec this series to anyone who likes an actual alpha mc and really like big harem in the scale of 30 to 50 harem members with the current pacing.

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