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2023-11-10 23:01

This is a really great novel, have been following this since it had around 600~ chapters. The daily wait for one chapter was way too harsh at times. never thought this novel would actually turn me, a manga, manhwa, manhwa enjoyer into reading blocks of text. Before reading mtw, literally never thought i would sit in chair and read a wn as i always thought, there is no way i would enjoy reading text only. but this proved my initial thought wrong. Now i actually like reading novels quite a lot. i have read till the recent chapter 887 as of this review and i must say, the sheer amount of plot progression that happened in one single volume cant be matched to all your previous volumes combined. Vol1 to vol5 is like prep for our mc victor, he was basically a continental level powerhouse near the end of demon wars and in king among kings, he is now at galaxy level which is fkin n*ts. He literally is like a cosmic horror akin to lovecraft works tho obviously if u compare the power, vic is quite significantly weaker then great old ones and such but i can totally see victor surpa** them in power scale as we are barely at vol 7 and i heard there could be 5 or 6 more volumes in plan, if following the same type of progression and cool powerups, vic could very well be the definition of op mc, a true weak to strong then to op mc. also really want to know, just how many volumes are you truly planning as this volume alone has been going for like 6-8 months already, probably the biggest volume for this novel till date. It did give of the feeling that you would end this novel in like next volume or something which i hope isn't true. this probably is my personal opinion, but i think you could try to lower your avg word count per chapter and give us 2 chap a day for a lot more consistency. which would atleast be a good return for the privilege purchase, like the highest priv locks 50 chapters/50 days worth of chapter for 30(31) days. and given your tight schedule, we barely even get 30 chaps a month. could you like lower the priv pruchase for the highest one or just make more chaps to justify the cost. while reading the story, specially in the current 800chap onwards, there is often mentions of 'sectors' 'galaxies' 'universes' and 'cosmos' this novel just makes me confuse as to what scale of things sometime being talked about by the characters. Earth is in milky way galaxy and earth is a mid level sector, so does this sector means that entire galaxy itself is a mid level sector area or a sector means one planet/solar system or multiple galaxies can be equated to one sector. Same confusion with samar and nightingale. gods in this novel are kind of really weak(?) tbh. idk why but aren't gods suppose to be omnipotence and omnipresent beings. but they all do some much dumb decisions, even more idiotic then mortals do from time to time. Clarification of god level is really poorly done, like from what i understood, its basically just primordial entty>primordial god>peak god king>god king>high level battle gods> average gods>low level combat gods>minor gods such as mountain god, etc. It truly feels very barebone. Victor basically already tops the power levels if you just remove regulators, as they are said to be truly infinite power, victor is nowhere near reaching that. There are emperors and overlords, but sometime i dont even understand how powerful they are tbh. All the primordial gods we have seen, no one has ever used their true forms and actually go all out and we dont truly see the scale of destruction being done. Where as if you look at victor, he has so many powers left to be explored and he is already galaxy creator level. We still dont know what his bld dragon exclusive progenitor perks. His concepts which awakened really recently also have a long way to go. He has gained both positive and negative energy sources, he has begin. only thing left form him to access chaos concept should be end only i guess. He also has yet to reach grandmaster and the stage above grandmaster well. so many power ups left. But the character pool of beings who could fight vic and make vic go all out doesn't really exist anymore. We have yet to see foreign entties who could very well face slam earth gods like a joke. that could be entertaining to see, but for now there is no as such character in the story. Velnohra won't be an enemy to vic anyway, so i hope the enemy she has is very very strong for her to go to a mid level sector to ask for help. The harem, please author make dedicated chapters for the girls first time at least, just having it skipped with just one or two lines is so lame, even the big o**y was skipped with some word counts, it is such a big l, big harem should in turn give us more seggs and more threesms and such, it just lacks so much in that department, its so sad. overall till chapter 887, i whole heartedly rec this series to anyone who likes an actual alpha mc and really like big harem in the scale of 30 to 50 harem members with the current pacing.

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Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?

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Really good novel, but author please increase the update chapter. even though this novel per chapter words is bigger then most of the top novels, but one chapter a day and sometime no chapter (i know you have issues since i see your comments) really is a demerit to this novel. It really is such a great harem novel and kind of like the best harem novel with the most chadest mc i have ever read. I am personally only like the action (including training part with scarlett sisters) aspect of the story (whether it is the wives who are fighting or mc) but with wives and lovers such as Victoria (really feels like an extra to complete familydon), (Lacus and Siena; i really do not understand why these two got added in the harem but i get pepper ), Demon generals who ended up getting alucard name but we saw no ritual or even a hint of snu snu with them. I hope you keep on continue the novel for two years at least. i felt like you were rushing the entire Greek war (which i thought would be a really major arc with hundred plus chap but it got concluded in like fifteen chap?) Samar arc felt like it went on for a while but at least it gave us the background for entire Samar so i was ok with it. I see Victor became so strong after Greek war and his dragon evolution that i feel all primordial gods just got trivialize, as i remember the war, no primordial god used their true form as they didnt want to destroy the pantheon so that went on Victor's favor as well but i don't even know if the true form of these gods is really that big of an massive upgrade to the power as its not stated anywhere in the novel about their multipliers like how it was done so for the Vampires. Even though the introduction of Emperors and Overlords seems to open the novel to Universal and multi-versal level, but the terminology of Sectors (Low, mid, high), Galaxies, Universes, Cosmos need to be explore further as right now the true extent of power is still in the air and we just don't have a lot of basis to gauge Victor's power anymore. I just feel all the known strongest gods and primordial gods, Victor can fight them all without any issues. I have saw your comments of who could face against Victor would be Odin, Ra, Amaterasu (and her two brothers who were said to be average gods in chapter 0 but now due to Amaterasu feeling a second gen primordial, i assume they are also primordial gods?) and God-king of Elder gods but i just feel like they really wont stand much of a fight (i would love to be wrong as i like fights where mc would need to go absolutely all out to win). Another note on harem, as much as i love big harems but can you please make mc like say no have boundaries and standards to his harem, i really don't like that anyone with a slightest aspect of 'obsession' and 'yandere' aspect will end up in the harem while his other harems like Mizuki, Victoria, the three scarlett sisters, Demon generals gets no good development or personal time with victor at all. I miss the chapters where Victor use to take girls to dates with there one on one time which really does wonder in long terms. Goddesses such as like Lilith, hestia, persephone (may be?), Nyx, gaia,(you hinted Tiamat as well), Dun Scaith (now?), Hera and Rhea (may be?) I have no idea how will u be managing this but i trust you, as i have trusted you to not ruin your novel with the pacing all this time. There is now the Blood god religion as well which has its own fair share of yanderes who totally fits Victors lover criteria. I just dont know if any of them will be his wives or not as its all the air which i really don't like. In the discord, i see that everyone just accepts that all the females who gets named and have even the slightest interest in Victor will be in his harem which just destroys the charm of the novel that was built for like 690+ chapters. Please don't ruin it just for some readers ask that you add this girl or that girl in the harem. I have heard from some people that there will be like 6 more volumes after this and i am very much looking forward to it, so please do your best in each volumes and don't rush story. I would love to see more detailed explanation of Victor's powers and skill sets, its been missing since his blood dragon transformation. Also on another note Please like give a good explanation of Power levels as the one given in chapter 0 is really lackluster for the hype fights this novel had. I hope u read this comment and have a nice day.

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