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Victor_Weismann
Victor_WeismannAuthor1yr
2023-07-12 14:16

This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh. About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.

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Ita_David
Ita_DavidLv4

more like loved it 😘

Admiral_Alex
Admiral_AlexLv15

Just started the novel and was wondering if the MC ever gets upset at the fact he was kidnapped and murdered? Because so far he just seems apathetic to the whole ordeal and being murdered by someone is just his average Tuesday night.

Kodex_
Kodex_Lv2

bless you this novel is amazing :)

Aplistia
AplistiaLv4

Would have been nice if his mother won't become a part of his harem. Ngl, he still have his father and his father is nice.

DamianBLoodnight
DamianBLoodnightLv2

at this point, I can't see his father as any nice person! and just not that he wants a harem and I can never agree for Anna to be part of Leon's harem! I like Anna much more than him no scratch now I don't even like him!

Aplistia:Would have been nice if his mother won't become a part of his harem. Ngl, he still have his father and his father is nice.
Crimson_Joy
Crimson_JoyLv1

This has been my fav novel , So I think you did a amazing job

Avi_Rohilla
Avi_RohillaLv11

victor I got kicked out of discord due to some misunderstanding and now I cannot join back with the link given here, if you see this please help..(if any other mod sees this plz help)

Antaka
AntakaLv2

no this is not your first novel. u have made fanfics before. honestly i used to love your work now i just hate u for ruining this amazing book. srsly what went wrong with?

Gwim_Weaper
Gwim_WeaperLv15

I think for a first novel you have created a masterpiece. Everyday I look foward to reading the new chapter, and it never disappoints me. Keep doing what you are doing. =)

IMMORTALONE
IMMORTALONELv13

I’ve read to ch 777 and it never gets brought up. I’ve always just assumed it’s a mixture of the MC being influenced by the marriage ritual, and the fact that everyone in this story has a few screws loose.

Admiral_Alex:Just started the novel and was wondering if the MC ever gets upset at the fact he was kidnapped and murdered? Because so far he just seems apathetic to the whole ordeal and being murdered by someone is just his average Tuesday night.
Aplistia
AplistiaLv4

Not really. He's kinda chill about that as long as no one endangers his love ones. Victor the main character is a top Yanderes btw sooo, good luck with those fools.

Admiral_Alex:Just started the novel and was wondering if the MC ever gets upset at the fact he was kidnapped and murdered? Because so far he just seems apathetic to the whole ordeal and being murdered by someone is just his average Tuesday night.
Mitchell_Akpan
Mitchell_AkpanLv1

it was splendid , what are your other books I must read them all

Ayomipo_Adenuga
Ayomipo_AdenugaLv2

can you teach me

Shuvam_Biswas
Shuvam_BiswasLv3

please daily update. I like too read your noval but you Eregular update upset me. please update many chapter.

Arif440
Arif440Lv3

nice

THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

you nailed it

Shuvam_Biswas
Shuvam_BiswasLv3

today's is no updates. ? ?

GhostMonkeyMan
GhostMonkeyManLv3

You did a amazing job especially the part where he was gonna leave the maid that killed the blonde wife’s mother figure to die. That was extremely cruel and I loved every second of it as he smiled at the women’s pain

Dream_Lord14
Dream_Lord14Lv12

Hi thHi there, just a random new author.If you are looking for a comedian and fun cultivation novel.At the same time packed with quite the action.Then try out this novel.Death courting immortal.

Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

he is son erebus

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Dav0_2138
Dav0_2138Lv15

Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?

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