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Leloch_vi_britania
Leloch_vi_britaniaLv23yr
2021-07-14 23:05

I was surprised when I saw this novel, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author is putting to make it well done. Don't expect anything too complex from this novel, it is simple and straightforward, the plot is well established and the characters are very good, (Kaguya is my favorite cough) Writing 5 stars. World was not developed enough for me to speak. Characters definitely 5 stars. updates? It's very good, the author updates every day with more than 2k words, as a reader I wanted more... but I know how difficult it is to do a good job like this without losing quality. Editor. this guy is very good, he is helping the author a lot. IsUnavailable, he's a good editor, the author sure found a gem. Overall, it's a good novel for you to read with a smile on your face all the time, Violet the wife who's been introduced so far is very cute, and everyone who likes Yandere can like her too. (Isn't she psycho like Yuno, is she more like Albedo than overlord?) This is a good novel that I will definitely follow, the author is also one of my favorites, I have always followed his work, and he is a good person. I think that's it for now, Seeya.

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Victor_Weismann
Victor_WeismannAuthor

Omg, thanks so much for the review, I don't even know what to say, but one thing I can say, thanks. And thank you so much for acknowledging the editor's work, he's been helping me a lot, I'm not a native of the US, because of that, it would be very difficult to do a good writing, but the editor helps a lot.

Leloch_vi_britania
Leloch_vi_britaniaLv2

All hail Britannia!!

Victor_Weismann:Omg, thanks so much for the review, I don't even know what to say, but one thing I can say, thanks. And thank you so much for acknowledging the editor's work, he's been helping me a lot, I'm not a native of the US, because of that, it would be very difficult to do a good writing, but the editor helps a lot.
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GreenSkull
GreenSkullLv3

Can you tell me, i enjoy reading smart, overpowered or overall powerfull main characters. So, is this a novel should i read ?

Leloch_vi_britania:All hail Britannia!!
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Dav0_2138
Dav0_2138Lv15

Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?

Luohuo
LuohuoLv14

Really good novel, but author please increase the update chapter. even though this novel per chapter words is bigger then most of the top novels, but one chapter a day and sometime no chapter (i know you have issues since i see your comments) really is a demerit to this novel. It really is such a great harem novel and kind of like the best harem novel with the most chadest mc i have ever read. I am personally only like the action (including training part with scarlett sisters) aspect of the story (whether it is the wives who are fighting or mc) but with wives and lovers such as Victoria (really feels like an extra to complete familydon), (Lacus and Siena; i really do not understand why these two got added in the harem but i get pepper ), Demon generals who ended up getting alucard name but we saw no ritual or even a hint of snu snu with them. I hope you keep on continue the novel for two years at least. i felt like you were rushing the entire Greek war (which i thought would be a really major arc with hundred plus chap but it got concluded in like fifteen chap?) Samar arc felt like it went on for a while but at least it gave us the background for entire Samar so i was ok with it. I see Victor became so strong after Greek war and his dragon evolution that i feel all primordial gods just got trivialize, as i remember the war, no primordial god used their true form as they didnt want to destroy the pantheon so that went on Victor's favor as well but i don't even know if the true form of these gods is really that big of an massive upgrade to the power as its not stated anywhere in the novel about their multipliers like how it was done so for the Vampires. Even though the introduction of Emperors and Overlords seems to open the novel to Universal and multi-versal level, but the terminology of Sectors (Low, mid, high), Galaxies, Universes, Cosmos need to be explore further as right now the true extent of power is still in the air and we just don't have a lot of basis to gauge Victor's power anymore. I just feel all the known strongest gods and primordial gods, Victor can fight them all without any issues. I have saw your comments of who could face against Victor would be Odin, Ra, Amaterasu (and her two brothers who were said to be average gods in chapter 0 but now due to Amaterasu feeling a second gen primordial, i assume they are also primordial gods?) and God-king of Elder gods but i just feel like they really wont stand much of a fight (i would love to be wrong as i like fights where mc would need to go absolutely all out to win). Another note on harem, as much as i love big harems but can you please make mc like say no have boundaries and standards to his harem, i really don't like that anyone with a slightest aspect of 'obsession' and 'yandere' aspect will end up in the harem while his other harems like Mizuki, Victoria, the three scarlett sisters, Demon generals gets no good development or personal time with victor at all. I miss the chapters where Victor use to take girls to dates with there one on one time which really does wonder in long terms. Goddesses such as like Lilith, hestia, persephone (may be?), Nyx, gaia,(you hinted Tiamat as well), Dun Scaith (now?), Hera and Rhea (may be?) I have no idea how will u be managing this but i trust you, as i have trusted you to not ruin your novel with the pacing all this time. There is now the Blood god religion as well which has its own fair share of yanderes who totally fits Victors lover criteria. I just dont know if any of them will be his wives or not as its all the air which i really don't like. In the discord, i see that everyone just accepts that all the females who gets named and have even the slightest interest in Victor will be in his harem which just destroys the charm of the novel that was built for like 690+ chapters. Please don't ruin it just for some readers ask that you add this girl or that girl in the harem. I have heard from some people that there will be like 6 more volumes after this and i am very much looking forward to it, so please do your best in each volumes and don't rush story. I would love to see more detailed explanation of Victor's powers and skill sets, its been missing since his blood dragon transformation. Also on another note Please like give a good explanation of Power levels as the one given in chapter 0 is really lackluster for the hype fights this novel had. I hope u read this comment and have a nice day.

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