Tianjia Lane No. 1
No. 1 Tian Family Alley was a hundred-year-old mansion.
In the 1930s, Zhang Yihe married into No.1 Tianjia Alley under her parents 'orders. Faced with her husband running away from home after being asked to pay his debts at the casino, her sister-in-law, Madam Zhou's disdain, and the bandits kidnapping her own son... She chose to face it firmly. She founded the Gancheng Women's School, supported the anti-Japanese campaign, covered her husband's revolution, treated the wounded of the New Fourth Army, and adopted the bandit's daughter...
In the twists and turns of his life, the owner of No. 1 Tianjia Alley warmed the people around him with kindness and overcame one life problem after another with tenacity. In the turbulent history, No. 1 Tianjia Alley was the cradle of the children of the women's school, the foothold of the anti-Japanese people, the shelter for the development and growth of the Party, and the happy home of thousands of descendants.
The children of the Wan family would always have a home in their hearts-No. 1 Tian Jia Alley.
I feel you need to change the type of writing point of view because you keep switching from third omniscient view to first person point of view. I couldn't make it past the first chapter because of that. Hopefully you'll take this correction and fix it because there are readers who don't like it. Thank you.