third person point of view limited and omniscient

Charm point maxed out, inheriting game assets

Gaining weight while single, carless, houseless, 25-year-old Tang Song, could see no hope in life. After facing workplace bullying, the Attractive Man nurturing game he had played for three years suddenly descended into the real world, along with the massive wealth and elite talents he possessed in the game. This is a story about nurturing an Attractive Man.

Selective cutting · Urban

Mythical Card Supplier: Starting with Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince

In the world of card games, myths from China will be re-established! Mythical legends of Earth will also become myths in this world! In this world of cards, with cards as the medium, the birth of myths is welcomed! What does it matter if the body is weak? What if suffering from muscle weakness? In this world without character cards, only equipped with weapon cards and skill cards, I will create a new genre! Starting with the Summoning Card: Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince! Give the world a shock from China!

Dancing with the Rising Sun · Eastern

Once, I wanted to be a good person

Fang Ze transmigrated to a world filled with superpowers and became a police. Initially, he planned to carry out his duties diligently. However, by chance, he discovered that his true identity was actually a criminal who had been arrested. The police faked his identity and made him believe that he was one of them. Then, they utilized his remaining memories to solve the case and identify his accomplices. They had set up a huge operation and were ready to capture him and his accomplices at any time! Fortunately, he acquired a superpower called the Midnight Investigation Room. At midnight every day, he could conduct an investigation on a chosen target. During his investigation, not only could he hear the actual thoughts running through the head of his subject, he could also acquire different items based on the value of the information he collected. Some of the items he acquired included: a mushroom that could sustain its host’s beauty forever; a credit card that allowed its users to loan from the future unlimitedly; a loyal assassin troop that lurked in the shadow; a demon eye that allowed its user to pry into the other world; a kobold that could learn and train with double efficiency on behalf of its master; seeds that could be attached to enemies’ bodies to make them puppets; and tapes that could transform human bodies into rocks when applied. In order to resolve his crisis, he collected information and investigated the case while improving his ability and expanding his influence. Unfortunately, he uncovered an even bigger scheme after solving his case. This entire world turned out to be a scheme! Many years later, Fang Ze sat on the throne of the King of Darkness. Accumulated beneath his throne were the countless skulls of his enemies.

Endless World · Games

Post-Mythical Era: I don't want to die in the third reincarnation

In the first reincarnation of Earth, the immortals vanished. In the second reincarnation of Earth, the dragon race disappeared. In the third reincarnation of Earth, mankind faced despair. Living in the third reincarnation of Earth, Ding Huan does not want to die.

Goose Five · Eastern

Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon

If you had the opportunity to be granted one wish, what would your wish be? All humans on Planet New Earth were given such an opportunity. A translucent screen appeared in front of every human promising to grant any wish to the humans of new earth. You want to be a god?- Granted You want to be a devil?- Granted You want to have powers like Gojo or Naruto or Sasuke or Saitama or Goku?- Granted You want to be the richest man on the planet?- Granted You want the world to end?- Granted You want... Wait, what?!!! Granted?!!! Any wish a human wished for was granted to them!! And then it happened, the apocalypse!!! And our average MC, Corey Junior Zane, due to circumstances wished for wisdom, not just ordinary wisdom though. Unlimited Wisdom, Knowledge and Understanding. Would our MC be able to survive in such a dangerous world without having the ability to defend himself. Would he be able to survive in his school where the common enemies are Smileys? Read to find out! NOTE: There are some wishes that would not be granted like wishing everyone to die and some other things. Just read to find out more. You'll definitely enjoy it. *P.S: Cover Art was not made by me.* *ALSO, READ MY REVIEW BEFORE READING THE BOOK*

Anon22 · Fantasy

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_EmpressOfLight_

2025-04-05

I feel you need to change the type of writing point of view because you keep switching from third omniscient view to first person point of view. I couldn't make it past the first chapter because of that. Hopefully you'll take this correction and fix it because there are readers who don't like it. Thank you.

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A good and simple story with the right touch of light drama coming your way. Good points you have in the story: 1) You have an exemplary plotline that will make the readers trigger their butterflies in their stomach whenever they will read this. 2) You have this genuine idea about love that makes me wonder what if my boy crush and my world would collide in the future or maybe in the present time. Negative feedback (for me): 1) I want to suggest that make the point of view of the synopsis into one only. You tend to mix up with the character's mind and the omniscient point of view. If you use the third person limited, that means you only have to focus with the mind of your main character. If you the third person point of view on the omniscient, you have to describe the characteristic and thoughts of the deuteragonists and the extras on the story. I suggest to do the latter for the synopsis. 2) I've seen a few grammatical errors in the first chapters, but that's okay, we could fix it. (Please do not hate me. I have shared my thoughts and learnings from this career to you.) Good job and best of luck, author!

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pandacornlova

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This book was definitely interesting. I have to admit, I've never read a book with this take on this type of point of view (third person limited, I think). It's unique. The story is good, the plot being interesting and one of the main focus characters has an unpleasant personality from the beginning. I would say this is definitely original!

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bibiyenini · Urban

350 Chs

Leaf_Flight

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This is an absolutely amazing novel. I get feeling this author is a fan Garron Whited like though. Anyways, great characters, great atmosphere, great world building. There was a part in the middle after part 2 ended where I skimmed through some chapters because the cliffhanger was just so intense and it suddenly switched from mostly third-person limited to third-person omniscient. Regardless, this is one of the best light novels I’ve ever read. I hope there is more.

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Jelim · Fantasy

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