omniscient first person point of view

Beast taming, starting from zero point

After transmigration, Qiao Sang found herself dressed as a junior high school student. Then came an exam. But wait, what kind of exam is it??? "What is the final evolutionary form of stinky loach called?" "What are the planets where humans have migrated." She is totally confused. Welcome to the world of beasts!

Add green onions for me · Fantasy

Charm point maxed out, inheriting game assets

Gaining weight while single, carless, houseless, 25-year-old Tang Song, could see no hope in life. After facing workplace bullying, the Attractive Man nurturing game he had played for three years suddenly descended into the real world, along with the massive wealth and elite talents he possessed in the game. This is a story about nurturing an Attractive Man.

Selective cutting · Urban

First Marriage, then love: wife, never divorce

Five years ago, she replaced her twin sister to marry him who was burned beyond recognition and even became a eunuch. Five years later, when they met again, he pressed her against the wall in the corner A low voice sounded with doubt. "Is your daughter mine? " The corners of her mouth curled into a sneer. "Are you sure you have the ability to do that? " His originally cold face instantly turned into the darkness before the storm His voice was fierce and low as he growled, "woman, you are challenging me! "

Joe Mai · Urban · MTL

Let's Squander A Billion First!

After Chuzheng is suddenly pronounced dead by a system all of a sudden, her only worry in life becomes—spending money. Ever since she gets stuck with this system, her back is no longer sore and her legs no longer ache. Heck, there isn't even a time when she goes out of breath. System: Let us set a small goal first and squander a hundred million... Little Miss, stop right there! Don't activate the invincible mode! (▼皿▼#) Chuzheng: Can you please explain what is this thing that is leeching off me? Random Thing: Babe, you can do whatever you want to me. Chuzheng: (touches her blade) In-In that case, I will not stand on ceremony. System: Little Miss, please put the saber down right this instant! (▼へ▼メ) #LittleMissAlwaysDoesAsShePleases.

Mo Ling · Sci-fi

The First Legendary Beast Master

Born into a dirt poor mining family, Karl only had one chance to get ahead in life, the annual elite recruitment day. On their final day of middle school, every student in the Golden Dragon Nation was given an experimental injection to awaken their affinity with magic. Those few who succeeded would become the Elite, the leaders and idols of the nation, blessed with incredible magical powers and respected by all. Those who did not would return to their normal lives of hard work and low wages, just doing the best they could. But with the nation surrounded by enemies, both humans and monsters, how long would these peaceful days of magical idols last? Follow the story of Karl as he awakens a unique power and strives to become the world's first Legendary Beast Master. Want to join the community for updates and upcoming news? Check out the discord. https://discord.gg/aokiaku

Aoki_Aku · Fantasy

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I feel you need to change the type of writing point of view because you keep switching from third omniscient view to first person point of view. I couldn't make it past the first chapter because of that. Hopefully you'll take this correction and fix it because there are readers who don't like it. Thank you.

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I feel this is your first so an advice use 3rd person point of view 2. keep changing point view from him to another person but so far you did avery good job 👏👍

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A good and simple story with the right touch of light drama coming your way. Good points you have in the story: 1) You have an exemplary plotline that will make the readers trigger their butterflies in their stomach whenever they will read this. 2) You have this genuine idea about love that makes me wonder what if my boy crush and my world would collide in the future or maybe in the present time. Negative feedback (for me): 1) I want to suggest that make the point of view of the synopsis into one only. You tend to mix up with the character's mind and the omniscient point of view. If you use the third person limited, that means you only have to focus with the mind of your main character. If you the third person point of view on the omniscient, you have to describe the characteristic and thoughts of the deuteragonists and the extras on the story. I suggest to do the latter for the synopsis. 2) I've seen a few grammatical errors in the first chapters, but that's okay, we could fix it. (Please do not hate me. I have shared my thoughts and learnings from this career to you.) Good job and best of luck, author!

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