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Charm point maxed out, inheriting game assets

Gaining weight while single, carless, houseless, 25-year-old Tang Song, could see no hope in life. After facing workplace bullying, the Attractive Man nurturing game he had played for three years suddenly descended into the real world, along with the massive wealth and elite talents he possessed in the game. This is a story about nurturing an Attractive Man.

Selective cutting · Urban

Mythical Card Supplier: Starting with Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince

In the world of card games, myths from China will be re-established! Mythical legends of Earth will also become myths in this world! In this world of cards, with cards as the medium, the birth of myths is welcomed! What does it matter if the body is weak? What if suffering from muscle weakness? In this world without character cards, only equipped with weapon cards and skill cards, I will create a new genre! Starting with the Summoning Card: Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince! Give the world a shock from China!

Dancing with the Rising Sun · Eastern

Once, I wanted to be a good person

Fang Ze transmigrated to a world filled with superpowers and became a police. Initially, he planned to carry out his duties diligently. However, by chance, he discovered that his true identity was actually a criminal who had been arrested. The police faked his identity and made him believe that he was one of them. Then, they utilized his remaining memories to solve the case and identify his accomplices. They had set up a huge operation and were ready to capture him and his accomplices at any time! Fortunately, he acquired a superpower called the Midnight Investigation Room. At midnight every day, he could conduct an investigation on a chosen target. During his investigation, not only could he hear the actual thoughts running through the head of his subject, he could also acquire different items based on the value of the information he collected. Some of the items he acquired included: a mushroom that could sustain its host’s beauty forever; a credit card that allowed its users to loan from the future unlimitedly; a loyal assassin troop that lurked in the shadow; a demon eye that allowed its user to pry into the other world; a kobold that could learn and train with double efficiency on behalf of its master; seeds that could be attached to enemies’ bodies to make them puppets; and tapes that could transform human bodies into rocks when applied. In order to resolve his crisis, he collected information and investigated the case while improving his ability and expanding his influence. Unfortunately, he uncovered an even bigger scheme after solving his case. This entire world turned out to be a scheme! Many years later, Fang Ze sat on the throne of the King of Darkness. Accumulated beneath his throne were the countless skulls of his enemies.

Endless World · Games

Post-Mythical Era: I don't want to die in the third reincarnation

In the first reincarnation of Earth, the immortals vanished. In the second reincarnation of Earth, the dragon race disappeared. In the third reincarnation of Earth, mankind faced despair. Living in the third reincarnation of Earth, Ding Huan does not want to die.

Goose Five · Eastern

Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon

If you had the opportunity to be granted one wish, what would your wish be? All humans on Planet New Earth were given such an opportunity. A translucent screen appeared in front of every human promising to grant any wish to the humans of new earth. You want to be a god?- Granted You want to be a devil?- Granted You want to have powers like Gojo or Naruto or Sasuke or Saitama or Goku?- Granted You want to be the richest man on the planet?- Granted You want the world to end?- Granted You want... Wait, what?!!! Granted?!!! Any wish a human wished for was granted to them!! And then it happened, the apocalypse!!! And our average MC, Corey Junior Zane, due to circumstances wished for wisdom, not just ordinary wisdom though. Unlimited Wisdom, Knowledge and Understanding. Would our MC be able to survive in such a dangerous world without having the ability to defend himself. Would he be able to survive in his school where the common enemies are Smileys? Read to find out! NOTE: There are some wishes that would not be granted like wishing everyone to die and some other things. Just read to find out more. You'll definitely enjoy it. *P.S: Cover Art was not made by me.* *ALSO, READ MY REVIEW BEFORE READING THE BOOK*

Anon22 · Fantasy

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_EmpressOfLight_

2025-04-06

I feel you need to change the type of writing point of view because you keep switching from third omniscient view to first person point of view. I couldn't make it past the first chapter because of that. Hopefully you'll take this correction and fix it because there are readers who don't like it. Thank you.

God of Death: Rise of the NPC Overlord

Bri_ght8491 · Games

298 Chs

bibiyenini

2020-11-03

A good and simple story with the right touch of light drama coming your way. Good points you have in the story: 1) You have an exemplary plotline that will make the readers trigger their butterflies in their stomach whenever they will read this. 2) You have this genuine idea about love that makes me wonder what if my boy crush and my world would collide in the future or maybe in the present time. Negative feedback (for me): 1) I want to suggest that make the point of view of the synopsis into one only. You tend to mix up with the character's mind and the omniscient point of view. If you use the third person limited, that means you only have to focus with the mind of your main character. If you the third person point of view on the omniscient, you have to describe the characteristic and thoughts of the deuteragonists and the extras on the story. I suggest to do the latter for the synopsis. 2) I've seen a few grammatical errors in the first chapters, but that's okay, we could fix it. (Please do not hate me. I have shared my thoughts and learnings from this career to you.) Good job and best of luck, author!

Till Our Worlds Collide

Wateristubeg · Fantasy

172 Chs

PillGrandCreator

2022-05-20

not bad, very passionate storytelling and nice world building, my biggest gripe with this novel is The change of point of view from third person to first person that happens constantly, as a reader it throws me off.

Novel Transmigration : Extra's Life

Sailfish · Fantasy

35 Chs

BIGO_NIGO

2020-11-08

its a good concept however the grammar is very lacking so I recommend using somthing like grammarly, also the way you narrate is kind of weird. You use first person (mc point of view) and third person (narrators point of view). I recommend you use more first person than third because that makes the reader feel more involved with the story. And when you write in third person dont write like you are the one who is speaking but a narrator who is in the universe and does not know about the fourth wall. For example dont say "the mc sat down" say "Lucas sat down"

POKEMON WISDOM

VEGETA_15505 · Anime & Comics

20 Chs

Project Miracle Pen: Young Secret Agent

This was a work from Chang 'an. Hero: Li Yuanfang. Author: Rong Xiaorong. " Magic Pen Project " was a collaboration between King of Glory and Yuewen Group. In the first event, Mobile Legends invited 25 well-known authors to create stories about kings based on Mobile Legends 'worldview and hero settings. The young man who had suffered a lot in his childhood and wandered around came to Chang 'an. He wanted to be an honest and trustworthy citizen, but he became a secret agent of the Supreme Court. The young man who was treated gently by Chang' an vowed to protect Chang 'an.

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A boat on a distant river

New actor x world champion "You are the hero of a peaceful era." Sheng Chuan, the seeded player of the national table tennis team. He had been a hot figure since he was young. After six years. Sheng Chuan acted as if he didn't know her. He was polite and distant. That night at the celebration banquet. She was dragged into a small space by a pair of large hands, trapped between him and the wall. It was pitch-black and sealed, and it was ambiguous. He was no longer as composed as he used to be, and his handsome face was filled with coldness. "Lin Ji." "Why can't you rely on me?" _ It only took half a year for Madam Lin to go from avoiding him to wanting to hang on to him. Shengchuan, the power is out at home." "Why aren't you back yet?" "Shengchuan, just accompany me more." I was originally a pitiful person who was almost bleak, but God gave me the best person in the world.

Shizhe

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After successfully reincarnating into the cultivation world, I won lying down

The new books,"I'm Wild After Dressing As A Big Boss 'Contracted Beast" and "After Rebirth, I've Became A Foppish Young Master's Favorite Pet" After White Dream's death, she had finally been reincarnated successfully. However, in order to be able to be successfully reincarnated, she had really worried her heart out. Not only was she afraid that she would accidentally miscarry, but she was also worried that her heartless father would forcefully miscarry her. Bai Meng shrugged helplessly."It's really too difficult for me." Only after successfully being born did he realize that he seemed to have been thrown into the cultivation world? But she didn't want to cultivate. She just wanted to be a salted fish and live a life of being fed by her parents, master, and senior brother every day! Master: Even if my disciple is a good-for-nothing, I will protect her for life! Senior Brother: Eh, Junior Sister is trash? Are you serious? At this moment, White Dream was being "grounded" by someone with a look of despair on her face. She even said harshly,"You're not allowed to come out until you break through!" Bai Meng looked at the person who had "confined" her and her face twitched. Don't think that I don't recognize you just because you're wearing a mask! A certain someone's eyes flashed with ridicule as he said,"Is there anything faster than dual cultivation?" Bai Meng held her sore waist and glared at him angrily! (Newbie, please open a book for support. Favorites, monthly votes, recommendation votes, tips (·_·́))

Shangguan Mengzi 'er

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Gifts innate divine power at the beginning of the game

Red County Divine Prefecture, during the New Year's weekend, the ritual system collapsed and the music was broken. The heroes fought for the deer, and the spiritual qi revived. There were martial heroes who could conquer mountains and rivers and control the stars and moon with one hand. There were also strange and demonic people who came from outside the world and set off a bloody storm. "The King of Qin swept across the world, and he can be taken over!" Obtained the Overlord Life Providence, Innate Divine Power Talent! "Thunder Eight Trigrams! What king do you want to become?" Obtained the Yuyu Fruit, Azure Dragon Form Talent! "My son, Wang Teng, has the potential to become a Great Emperor." Obtained the martial art heavenly eye talent! "You did your best, little god of the human world." Obtained Physique Saint Demon Origin Embryo! "The dual-pupils are originally an invincible path. Why do I need to borrow other people's bones!" Obtained talent, dual-pupils! "A king cannot be humiliated! Even if I have to carry the Heavenly Abyss and support the Primordial Emperor City with one hand, I, An Lan, will still be invincible in the world! Scarlet Edge Spear, Immortal Shield, Slay All Celestial Kings and Destroy the Nine Heavens!" You have obtained the Bloodline Talent, Scarlet Spear! ………… Lin Mo's Innate Talent Pearl was activated. Red County, Nine Regions, the end of the world, the attack of thousands of races, and writing his own legend in the turbulent sea.

Golden-edged weeds

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The Elf Starting From Zero

[Fine Grade Badge],[Riwan Badge]. The quality and quantity were guaranteed, and the old author had over ten thousand high reservations! …… He traveled through the elven world of a thousand years ago and became a farm owner. However, this world of elves seemed to be different from what he had imagined. It was dark and barbaric. The elves here were called magical beasts, and humans and magical beasts were full of battles. Let's see how Ivan uses modern elves to learn how to farm, make fertilizers, nurture elves, create elf balls, develop technology, and forge a new order! For many transmigrators, technology was the number one productive force, but here, the elves were the number one productive force! This was the story of an elven cultivator silently farming and establishing the elven alliance. [Also known as: Farming from the Elves, I established the Elf Alliance in the Ancient Elf World, and the Elf Breeder's Farming Journey] Keyword: Pokémon, Special

It's cute and delicious

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