idk if author deletes the negative reviews, but i only see outstanding reviews on a mediocre AI infested story.... the commentson eqch chapter are over the top, saying this is the best intro and yada yada, when nothing original has been introduced besides the eight year old alicent having a phd in shakespearean english so to speak
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Thanks for the review! Actually I haven’t delete any comments or reviews. I was quite surprise that there was none before. Also the plot and scene was all written by me. I just use AI to help with grammer since of course English is not my first language. Which would you prefer. Would you perfer an unreadable novel or a novel which you are able to read and understand.
Also Alicent is 10 not 8. And I agree the dialogue can be improved.
That's just how this sight is. Barely anyone actually reviews, it's either 5/5 amazing, best read ive ever had or it's horrible 1/5, very rarely will you see an actual review. When I see a story with nothing but 5/5 reviews will I even give it a chance because it's usually all just bland reused garbage. Hell people will give a story 5/5 and the review will say "I can't wait to read the story."
That’s true. I actually do want criticism on my writing. For example some complain of AI, which is valid since I use it since to improve the grammer. English is not my first language so sometime shit be making no sense sometimes when I am writing a draft.
CP_Strats:That's just how this sight is. Barely anyone actually reviews, it's either 5/5 amazing, best read ive ever had or it's horrible 1/5, very rarely will you see an actual review. When I see a story with nothing but 5/5 reviews will I even give it a chance because it's usually all just bland reused garbage. Hell people will give a story 5/5 and the review will say "I can't wait to read the story."
bad english is better than bad ai
Ninja_King_3834:That’s true. I actually do want criticism on my writing. For example some complain of AI, which is valid since I use it since to improve the grammer. English is not my first language so sometime shit be making no sense sometimes when I am writing a draft.
bad AI kills the story, believe me. all of readers have read mtl so bad english is very mucbbetter than AI which makes alicent or the mc, who should be using sinpler language,act like a ponce from the english royalty
Ninja_King_3834:Thanks for the review! Actually I haven’t delete any comments or reviews. I was quite surprise that there was none before. Also the plot and scene was all written by me. I just use AI to help with grammer since of course English is not my first language. Which would you prefer. Would you perfer an unreadable novel or a novel which you are able to read and understand.image
I would much rather read bad English than AI. Trust me I’ve read some really shitty novels with bad grammar and spell, yet there is nothing that ruins a story more than AI. Keep it authentic and only use grammarly to correct spelling or add commas. No generating any words or sentences. I promise AI does not sound better than whatever you write.
Ninja_King_3834:That’s true. I actually do want criticism on my writing. For example some complain of AI, which is valid since I use it since to improve the grammer. English is not my first language so sometime shit be making no sense sometimes when I am writing a draft.
Thanks for the feedback I’ll try to improve 👍
Vanhick:I would much rather read bad English than AI. Trust me I’ve read some really shitty novels with bad grammar and spell, yet there is nothing that ruins a story more than AI. Keep it authentic and only use grammarly to correct spelling or add commas. No generating any words or sentences. I promise AI does not sound better than whatever you write.
read the novel first b4 making reviews ur just making urself stup*d with that kind of unhelpful comment.
i read upto the latest chapter at the time of writing that review
magapi:read the novel first b4 making reviews ur just making urself stup*d with that kind of unhelpful comment.
and u still rate this novel based on the others comment
STEVIOL_GLY:i read upto the latest chapter at the time of writing that review
i didnt, if you will read my comments in chapters, i criticised the use of ai and some audience had the same points, points i had made. the comment thing was there wrre no original comments beside praises for the story, praises of the utmost revere, while i found the story rather mediocre, unworthy of that level of praise.
magapi:and u still rate this novel based on the others comment
welp that's ur opinion, can't argue with that...
STEVIOL_GLY:i didnt, if you will read my comments in chapters, i criticised the use of ai and some audience had the same points, points i had made. the comment thing was there wrre no original comments beside praises for the story, praises of the utmost revere, while i found the story rather mediocre, unworthy of that level of praise.
It's really complicated, here at WN it's like you said either 5/5 or no review,That's why I'm using Scribble Hub more, since it's more practical there, and many of the stories here are there.
STEVIOL_GLY:i didnt, if you will read my comments in chapters, i criticised the use of ai and some audience had the same points, points i had made. the comment thing was there wrre no original comments beside praises for the story, praises of the utmost revere, while i found the story rather mediocre, unworthy of that level of praise.
Author when you use grammr try to use concise wording like "grammar and spellcheck, do not rewrite or rephrase, highlight the changes you made (make it bold): your text here" Otherwise, GPT will try to rewrite your work in its own works and make it very boring and tedious like some kind of essay or acedamic paper. Sometimes perfection doesn't makes something better, it makes it mediocre.
Ninja_King_3834:Also Alicent is 10 not 8. And I agree the dialogue can be improved.
Yep I’ve learned this now. If you read up to recent chaps you’ll see. Thanks for feedback.
hero4hire:Author when you use grammr try to use concise wording like "grammar and spellcheck, do not rewrite or rephrase, highlight the changes you made (make it bold): your text here" Otherwise, GPT will try to rewrite your work in its own works and make it very boring and tedious like some kind of essay or acedamic paper. Sometimes perfection doesn't makes something better, it makes it mediocre.
It's pure AI, if you read others you know exactly what the issue is here. Try the first chapter and you will see it. The idea? Its interesting, ideas are easy, executing them is not and having an AI spew out words and copy paste into here is... not a good execution of a good idea.
is he sort like the comic version or normal size????
Ninja_King_3834:Yep I’ve learned this now. If you read up to recent chaps you’ll see. Thanks for feedback.
5’10 at beginning. 6’0 as of now. Read the story to understand why he grew
Artist_Arton:is he sort like the comic version or normal size????image
ok thanks
Ninja_King_3834:5’10 at beginning. 6’0 as of now. Read the story to understand why he grew
