ErozothDraeor

Revealing so many of his abilities and origin with his insignificant power... tsk tsk tsk. From now on, plot armor is with him.

Quality-wise, there is nothing to say. It is near perfect, AI or manually written; it is written and then edited well. Having said that, the start of the story was entertaining because it's the growing phase, like a good training montage, but now... I find myself less interested, purely due to my own preferences, the MC is too young for me to feel... attached, invested, interested. At that age, frankly anything under 17, feels like its some anime or a book like Percy Jakson, lots of plot armor and this "all is nice and pleasant", its not even the authors fault, any, you literally cannot write realism story with younger character because most websites wont let you post it. Forget about patreeon.

Real question, was the way he died supposed to be funny? This is a REALLY bad chapter as first impression for the mc: Greedy for money, couldn't commit to a plan properly, went to trash place like he did, died that way... This is Tony Stark material right there... not

I liked that, finally a person who doesn't want to be the husband cook cliche, if I am rich or powerful, I got better things to do, and there are others that do it better than I am.

Yea, unless some unseen, amazing plot line, I can't think off, comes in the next 1-2 chapters to explain the MCs actions in a good way, completely not in line with his previous personality... it just crash and burn and go read something else.

They don't, in fact, it clearly said there were wild dragons, and not all wanted to be in the deal with the elves. As long as this is not some important fact to the story and the author doesn't bring it up often it shouldn't be an issue, having said that, unique idea and I am surprised I haven't see it before but I don't read none human MC.

I was thinking more about the fact, that this guy is about to have a very bad life, if he was not evil before... he will be now. Not exactly the hero thing to do, just watch it happen. Granted, I vaguely remember he was a criminal, but that was not in this story.

So... he doesn't kill, visibly, and he just let them create a new villain, and no info was provided on their test subject but was he evil? because the MC just watched as he turned into a monster.

Its alive

What a way to kill a novel 1. Skipping 3 chapters because it didn't feel like translating them? I am still confused about that part, and unlikely to try more novels from this account. 2. I am 100% sure the author, or the translation, is messing up the cultivation levels, the order, calling the same level different words and its all for a small arc of a fanfiction, its pretty bad.