ErozothDraeor

As of chapter 91, I don't recall seeing anything like this, if there is you probably need to really look for it, I started reading two days ago so I would remember if it was really bad.

Look, I know you are the translator, I appreciate translating it and its a good translation... but, the story is really going downhill for me. If there is no cheat, great, I will read the novel if it is good and I like it. If there is a cheat, I want to see the cheat, seems like this story cheat is just plot armor, it only works when the author decides. MC just spent 3 years without activating the cheat once, that's... a bad story. The chances of that happening, the chances you have an MC in power fantasy: I can find a new place and get massive power right now, or I can train slowly... what should I choose? (And a fanfiction on top of that). It's all fake, its all written by the author, good authors make it appear like a story, bad authors make it clear its all artificially controlled, author gave the MC a cheat that would make him above everyone, tournament came up and the author decided: wait, hold up, I need the MC to fight hard against the last contestant, PUASE CHEAT! (or at least not so easily he just waves his hand) Besides that, I usually don't like entire chapters on side characters, especially when its meaningless stuff, so getting 4 chapters and speed through them just to see... well, nothing to see.

I'v read this story before, at least going by the synopsis, on fanfiction. I don't really care about copying some chapters, assuming its only a similar start but the story will grow to be different but if its a repost by the author or worse, someone else, say so. Down to the fact Lily worked in the department of mysteries and entering the cave in Smallville. There is no hiding stuff like this on the internet.

errr... He was born in the vault, 10 years ago, if anyone came to the vault (which I highly doubt if going by the origin of the vault and the game details) it would be his father and mother, or just one of them.

I like this, always a detail authors forget to add to make sure readers know: Yes, this is a real cheat, MC earns tangible rewards, ie knowledge. Without this very important paragraph in other novels its just the MC training, getting a +1 and becoming better, ie what everyone does in life to get better.

Now he runs? Throw a grenade or smoke bomb, wait for the wind to disperse it, then run.

This chapter was a let down. MC didn't detect the humans and left literally 10 minutes after detecting the tiger from afar. He used a bomb, that would obviously not kill them all, and instead of running just as he used it he just stood there, guess he has a plot armor pocket protector so its fine... so much for smarter MC.

Why? Can detect tiger and hide but not people? Dumb plot, just to cause the same plot from the original, this is turning into a copy with different steps.

What is Burning Art?.... oh the Flame Mantra or technique he got.

What? 4 years old breakthrough, fell 3 levels and then 7 years to get those 3 levels again?