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ErozothDraeor

ErozothDraeor

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Good thing the hour tracker doesn't work from Windows, I wouldn't want to know how much I spent reading on this site.

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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor16d
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    I will pass. I found the Spider-Man story far better, other than the obvious comparisons I find this story boring, the MC is... lacking, the mashup of worlds is a mess, there are many holes that are very loosely "patched", some that made no sense and its a feeling I can't shake after so many chapters, the worlds were taken as is and mashed up like each empire, worlds, etc would not be different by the very difference of this world yet they are all identical to how we know them yet connected. The MC... meh, I just don't feel like he is good enough, it feels a lot like the intention was for him to be powerful, competent, capable and then it is being nerfed or held back by using his personality to balance it. Anyway, I found it mostly boring, a struggle to read, back to catch up on spider-man, that one wanted an OP MC, went for it and it works, this one went for OP MC (50K+ of force) then back tracked with far far to long growth period. Could it improve? Sure, but like many novels that say: It gets better after 50-100 chapters, I won't be around to read it.

    Ch 40 C40 Gamora’s Failed Escape
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
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    Nice story, but trial ended too early. Chapter 40 maybe but not enough content to really decide if its worth it.

    Ch 39 Prosperity, All Mine
    Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder
    Sci-fi · bomer_allen
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
    Commented

    Feels like this is the real upgrade, he can see rep now.

    [Transfer condition: Favorability over 60%]
    Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder
    Sci-fi · bomer_allen
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
    Commented

    Going to pass on this. The cultivation system is controlled by the author too much, the time the MC cultivated compared to the number of months he got and his breakthrough do not match, now he will breakthrough when he needs, meaning the author will let him breakthrough for plot rather than on a schedule of some kind that will match his progress. It completely invalidates the cultivation he gets from plants, it could be 3 month worth or 20 years, he will only breakthrough if the plot needs it.

    Ch 20 Chapter 19: Qi Cultivation Level 4 (Seeking Follow-up Reading)_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
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    I like it overall, except his cultivation progression, its so badly done it feels like the story would be better if there was none of it. he is 16... maybe 17, he was already level 2 of Qi, overall he got around 3 years worth of cultivation from plants (after he reached level 3 qi) yet he hasn't made it to level 4 yet, and this is almost 3 years of constant cultivation, far more than he was doing on his own yet he reached level 2, when did he start, when he was 4-5 years old?

    Ch 15 Chapter 14: Return_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
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    The cultivation progression sucks. He is 16-17 and was level 2, and close to portal if it. He got so many cultivation time, near or above 3 years but he is still level 3? When did he start to cultivate to reach the initial level 2, when he was 4?

    Ch 9 Chapter 8 Concealment Method_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    I will remember this novel as the first one that made me like The Sentry.

    Ch 7 UA Entrance Exam
    MHA: The Sentry
    Anime & Comics · Satus_Null
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
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    I'm going to drop it here, having a "female lead" so soon, ie romance killed it for me, mostly her looks, he has the ability to change her (which might change her personality), yet she will remain looking like an animal because the MC doesn't want to change her? I think of things in realistic terms to decide if I like something: If the MC does something, is it for plot or would a real person do it? Looking like that, in a real world, will make life overall far worse than looking normal or not that extreme, and if the MC didn't have the ability to change her AND it took time for the MC to say "She is the one!" I could convince myself to read further, but this? This is the author deciding because he likes the character or furry or both. If the MC met her, got to know her, etc. I could understand, If you want to tell me that a human could meet her and fall in love? Sure, but it will be the kind that takes time, that you need to get to know the person first to accept\overcome the initial strangeness of their appearance. Seeing furry with anime esthetics is one thing, seeing something like that in a real-life situation, full realism would look WAY different and would explain the reaction of other people, fur all over the body, a face the reminds you of your pet dog... BUT the MC can change her, that's a point I won't get over with, a literal raise of his hand and its done. Goodbye.

    Ch 7 UA Entrance Exam
    MHA: The Sentry
    Anime & Comics · Satus_Null
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Replied to Isaiah_Warner

    I'd rather he learns to do it himself than rely on others all the time, beside he already said the same thing so I assume he will learn eventually. I guess they don't have issues learning new things when older.

    Despite not being the most technologically adept, Peter had learned much from Aayla over the past three years. His confidence, although not the best when it comes to these sorts of things, felt unwavering today.
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    lol, if anything she is grooming him to be nicer, caring, etc.

    **Second, to the people who are commenting that Peter is grooming/manipulating Aayla, he is not, full stop. They have a sibling relationship. There has been zero romance. The reason that I've even begun to focus on Aayla in the story is to build up her character, as she will later join the Guardians of the Galaxy. Anyway, enjoy the chapters :)
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    This MC is pavloving himself into being a moron.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 Gold-Class Tour Guide
    There Is A Huge Problem With My Achievement System
    Urban · Tianluo Lightning Flash
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
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    One paragraph made me feel like we just wasted time reading 11 chapters. If all he did came to so little, it is useless, it seems to me like it was more for the effect, a small temporary nerf so action happens, then back as usual. Might as well just get a wand.

    He didn't have time to ponder the question as the beast lunged at him again, its claws outstretched, its maw gaping wide. Lucas thrust out his hand, his mind reaching out to seize the creature with his telekinesis. But to his surprise, the beast shrugged off the invisible grip, its body shimmering with a faint, golden aura.
    Vast Sea Visualization
    Book&Literature · Evoxius
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
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    Couldn't he just... do all this stuff again, why does it keep going back to previous life memories, it feels a bit like a limiting cheat, eventually there has to be something magic teaches he won't be able to match to an emotion. It is, so far, not explained well, it never mentioned the fact that once he spends the time to match a memory to an action that is it, he doesn't need to do it again, it talked at first about practicing until its automatic but never since.

    And then, he found it. A memory from his past life, a moment of profound nihilism as he contemplated the vastness of the universe, the insignificance of his own existence. It was a cold thought, a chilling realization that had left him feeling small and alone.
    Vast Sea Visualization
    Book&Literature · Evoxius
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    I like the fact that he acts more mature than his age, some people find it weird, maybe unsetteling, but in the end convince themselves he just different or unique, what I imagine most people would do in such situation rather than the usual MC M.O. of: Hide, pretend., if someone finds out the very fabric of reality will implode.

    Ch 8 Toddler Prodigy
    Vast Sea Visualization
    Book&Literature · Evoxius
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Good chapter.

    Ch 6 Two smiles for the same person
    MHA: The Sentry
    Anime & Comics · Satus_Null
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    This is why I don't like the "sealing" his power, its bs, its pointless. I have no idea if he has his power sealed right now, it comes down to the author. He might be sealed or not, the author decides what he can or cannot do, whenever.

    I became intangible and began to descend, passing through the structures of the upper part until I reached the underground. I paused when I found Overhaul and two of his henchmen. They were all frozen after I shut down their consciousness.
    MHA: The Sentry
    Anime & Comics · Satus_Null
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Is this paid already for forces use of map... pass, this borderline not brain dead stupid, but still is.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 Youth Swordsman·Bai Tianhong!
    Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat
    Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    wth, this is a duplicate realm.

    [Daya Calendar, year 486, April 8th, you successfully broke through to the late-stage Skin Refining Realm and were very happy. This time, you didn't choose to get married; you planned to lay low until death.]
    Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat
    Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Didn't they say its not possible to trade or send things?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: New Group Members! The Same World!
    Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat
    Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    The fact he does not get rewards and its daily basically means the entire novel will be 80% simulation, ie. what could have been and basically pointless to read.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Do Not Show Off Wealth
    Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat
    Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream
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