ErozothDraeor

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Overall, a nice read. Nothing amazingly new or unique, but done well. An actual cheat system, not "system" but just a genius MC. Maybe a tad too much commentary of others: MC sucks, MC amazing. But not so much that it's annoying to read.

To say the MC is not the sharpest tool in the shed is being nice.

pass. his personality shift came out of nowhere, don't like that, not to mention he's an ass.

Overall lazy. No brain, zero effort to make this even remotely serious. The Mc has world breaking cheats, the end.

Wow, he got a nerf there. Went from completing 5th year in his first, then second year he finished 6th year, now you are talking about finishing 7th year in his 5th year. Just saying, that's the realm of a normal genius, not someone with his cheats, merely two years a head. By 5th year I expect him to start studying beyong hogwarts, hell, 4th year.

Don't tell me his system is taking gold from the bank to give him as reward?

Using em dash instead of "" when he talks? Lazy, not giving me any hope for future chapters. Having a duneon he can just farm to gain power? So far this is not a story, this is the equivelent to character creation in a video game, we haven't yet seen the actual game. It's pointless beyond the MC gaining some maturity and healing mentally, IF the author allows him to. 6 month of being free, without pain, gaining power, should go a long way to heal his trauma, if not completely, it remains to be seen if the author thinks at all and will follow that or will still bs the MC having trauma.

I am 99.9% sure he meant Conquer Whomever you desire. Wink wink.

NIce touch.