I never get this plot line, everyone uses it, the MC could be Homelander and its also the same. I didn't watch the TV show, but somehow I still know that Edgar has to die. The MC, in this novel... grabs him, and no one would know or see what happened, deal with him. Unless it's going with the MC being too stupid or kind (neither match his origin) to do it or see this coming? Too stuck in his hero gig?

I think there is a massive plot hole and ignoring it does nothing for the story, its like ignoring an obvious solution just to get some drama or maintain the plot for no good reason. MC: If you marry Rais to the Phenex I will not sell any of my items or potions (healing, fertility) to the Gremory or their allies. DONE! Marriage is canceled before he stops talking. MC: I won't sell to the entire devil race if that happens (this is stupid, more extreme and he can't really do it, but suggesting it as a threat to, say, Sera... will make things happen). There are many things he could do. So sticking to the rating game just feels like.... reducing your own novels quality just because its was original plot. Sometimes, simple solutions are the unique, hell, you could use this and then have issues come with the Phenex as a result which ends up with similar plot line but now it makes sense.

Many shows and books that happen on Earth could be merged, happening in different regions. Harry Potter would not make sense or point, he has no magic an it would be a tough sell to explain why the magical are not involved with all the vampires killing people (if only to hide it). Teen wolf, Originals, etc.... why? So similar it just adds a different story but doesn't add to the story. If you can think of something unique that will add to the story, if you intend to go into adventure or something like that the Tomb Raider world might work. There are plenty others.

Yea, when the synopsis is that bad I won't give the novel half a chance.

He promised to fight someone that powerful in exchange for sword fighting and language class?

I am certain I did and I know why I dropped it. For me, not being a transmigrator kills it, even if you do not know the original source material. A Clark Kent character in this world, any world, is a walking plot armor, I genuinely cringe at how everything just works when nothing is real-world logic. If Superman was real, in a world like ours, I would say he is living in a delusion, The Boys world is no different.

I think I read this before or at least tried.

Come on, have some sense of realism. If she has all that experience how has she practically raised him? At least if she... 50 or immortal.

If its limited time (first... nerf on first chapter?) then why does he need to be careful?

Thanks. At least this tells me when its stolen and its dead so I can skip them.

I'll try. While that world could do with someone like him... I feel his strict rules have no real chance of fixing that world with nothing short of reality manipulation, aka plot armor. It would have been more likely to have someone nearly as "good" but transmigration with vague idea of that world.

I get the idea of the story, It's cool... it was just poorly done. Several plot holes with how Jin regains his power and memories when the gates opening but then the MC needing to protect the world before that happens... but there are no gates for him to grow strong. Feels like the author didn't want transmigration into Jin so he made a new MC and half assed his explanation, which is pretty bad since the entire plot depends on it.

Where will he get these XP from? Once the gate opens Jin regains his memories, this was literally two paragraphs ago and the MC needs to protect the world BEFORE Jin regains his memories. What a mess.

What? Jin will get his memories when the gates start appearing, MC needs to protect the earth until then, ie he needs to be strong BEFORE the gates appear? How will he get power if there are no gates and are you saying the super powerful enemies that Jin was unable to defeat 300 years in the future will show up early (I mean, if they retain their memories, why wait?). This seems like some pretty messy plot holes. The entire explanation seems good on the surface but even a quick overview comes up with multiple plot holes that cannot be resolved, feels like author either missed those (unlikely) or decided to ignore and: It will be fine, don't worry! but eventually it will cause the story to be somewhat of a joke.

Guess Alucard can be his alias or something like that when dealing with other supernaturals.

I would imagine he is the true vampire and they are a variant at best, but most likely just something else that similar to vampire and the only similarity really is the blood.

Ignoring the cold is kinda.... not working.

I feel your writing style is too detail-oriented, while the amount of details and description does make it easier to see what the MC does I think you are overdoing it. A simple: "Walked in and killed 3 molerats and set up a trap for the others" turned into an entire chapter, this is barebone, no good, level of description but at least the story will go somewhere. at the current rate, you will have: a very short amount of time described over several chapters>Time skip>repeat.

This mostly feels like an auxiliary chapter.