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2024-10-01 13:00

great start, a cross between GOT world and The Godfather movies. Always wanted a GOT story the MC gets Wolverine's power set. kkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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To start off, I'll say that I'm writing this while I'm in the middle of work, because I can't get your story out of my head, so that's a sign of its quality. Before I go with a review I'll say it's a silly thing out of frustration that there are less than 100 chapters instead of 500 as I would like. AUTHOR! GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!. After this silly thing I'll go with the actual review: The first chapters are too influenced by AI, but the author read the comments and fixed it and that improved the story to the point that I don't remember if it was just the first chapter or it was 5, but no matter the quality of the story improved enormously. Let's talk about the MC, when I saw the story I thought it would be the typical cliché, a protagonist dies and reincarnates in the body of a native, but the author did something really surprising for any fanfic. He did something original. The soul of the earth dweller that should inhabit the MC's body (an obese, useless, and disgustingly perverted guy) is consumed, giving him memories of Wolverine's plot and template. Just the fact that he didn't make another Mushoku tensei made the story 100% better, a lot of people treasure that story, but Rudeus' character is so unpleasant in many ways that it makes me unable to enjoy it. Leaving that aside, the MC gains Wolverine's abilities, and let me tell you, in a setting like Game of Thrones, not only does it make it OP, but it's tremendously convenient (in a good way), it's incredible how the author develops the protagonist's criminal empire, very Godfather-esque and damn, you look REALLY good, it's intriguing, interesting, and very entertaining. The romance is just beginning, but it's clear that the character will aspire to at least two wives and I hope it ends there, because I like Daenerys, the harem is so cliché in these stories that it's already boring, so if the author is hesitating about doing it, the answer is probably no. To sum up, a story that's just beginning but has incredible potential, very well written, with an original plot (for an asoiaf fanfic) and deep and interesting characters.

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