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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv156mth
2024-10-16 22:53

Not bad but AI never the less so all it deserves is a two or three star at most

Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template

Ninja_King_3834
4.4
71 Chs

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Ninja_King_3834
Ninja_King_3834Author

Thanks for the review. It’s a shame you didn’t read on because I manage to improve the writing and the ai problems.

6mth
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Not bad but AI review nevertheless your a bad human being

5mth
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Dextrode
DextrodeLv4

Ignore the people bashing AI. While it can be overused, it’s an amazing tool when properly utilized. All you need is too fine tune it some practice with the prompts. It’s especially good for getting a variety of dialects. Given the medieval setting of ASOIAF it could be very useful.

Ninja_King_3834:Thanks for the review. It’s a shame you didn’t read on because I manage to improve the writing and the ai problems.
3mth
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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

You probably would change your mind after reading enough that you can pick out Ai novels passively just by reading. I used to never have a problem with them but then I started to see the patterns and how an ai will always overuse descriptor words and the way they portray emotions compared to if it were written and edited by hand. It’s almost to the point I’d rather read badly translated Chinese novels then read Ai novels

Dextrode:Ignore the people bashing AI. While it can be overused, it’s an amazing tool when properly utilized. All you need is too fine tune it some practice with the prompts. It’s especially good for getting a variety of dialects. Given the medieval setting of ASOIAF it could be very useful.
3mth
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Dextrode
DextrodeLv4

I’ve read dozens of AI novels. I’ve read even more shit translated ones. I can skip/scim through overly descriptive paragraphs and AI does better dialogue than atleast 95% of authors on this site. In a perfect world everyone would be fluent in English and a great writer. We do not live in such a world.

Queen_Karina:You probably would change your mind after reading enough that you can pick out Ai novels passively just by reading. I used to never have a problem with them but then I started to see the patterns and how an ai will always overuse descriptor words and the way they portray emotions compared to if it were written and edited by hand. It’s almost to the point I’d rather read badly translated Chinese novels then read Ai novels
3mth
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T_Smith_7285
T_Smith_7285Lv15

This story has potential. The Wolverine and his X-men.

6mth

MadFool
MadFoolLv15

So far so good. The MC has a "transmigration benefit" that does not completely break the power balance of ASOIAF world. Mc is relatively smart and ruthless, but has clear boundaries that he doesn't cross. Start has been promising so I hope the quality doesn't drop but so far plot hasn't progressed much so it's too early to tell.

6mth
The_Jagger_
The_Jagger_Lv11

To start off, I'll say that I'm writing this while I'm in the middle of work, because I can't get your story out of my head, so that's a sign of its quality. Before I go with a review I'll say it's a silly thing out of frustration that there are less than 100 chapters instead of 500 as I would like. AUTHOR! GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!. After this silly thing I'll go with the actual review: The first chapters are too influenced by AI, but the author read the comments and fixed it and that improved the story to the point that I don't remember if it was just the first chapter or it was 5, but no matter the quality of the story improved enormously. Let's talk about the MC, when I saw the story I thought it would be the typical cliché, a protagonist dies and reincarnates in the body of a native, but the author did something really surprising for any fanfic. He did something original. The soul of the earth dweller that should inhabit the MC's body (an obese, useless, and disgustingly perverted guy) is consumed, giving him memories of Wolverine's plot and template. Just the fact that he didn't make another Mushoku tensei made the story 100% better, a lot of people treasure that story, but Rudeus' character is so unpleasant in many ways that it makes me unable to enjoy it. Leaving that aside, the MC gains Wolverine's abilities, and let me tell you, in a setting like Game of Thrones, not only does it make it OP, but it's tremendously convenient (in a good way), it's incredible how the author develops the protagonist's criminal empire, very Godfather-esque and damn, you look REALLY good, it's intriguing, interesting, and very entertaining. The romance is just beginning, but it's clear that the character will aspire to at least two wives and I hope it ends there, because I like Daenerys, the harem is so cliché in these stories that it's already boring, so if the author is hesitating about doing it, the answer is probably no. To sum up, a story that's just beginning but has incredible potential, very well written, with an original plot (for an asoiaf fanfic) and deep and interesting characters.

5mth
GLYCOSIDES
GLYCOSIDESLv4

idk if author deletes the negative reviews, but i only see outstanding reviews on a mediocre AI infested story.... the commentson eqch chapter are over the top, saying this is the best intro and yada yada, when nothing original has been introduced besides the eight year old alicent having a phd in shakespearean english so to speak

6mth
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14

The story feels bloated filled with redundant and overly descriptive words, reading this makes my head go dizzy. I bet nearly 3/4ths of the story is filler words added by an AI.

6mth
1day
1dayLv3

I’m dropping this story because the author first develops romantic stories (Cersei, Elia), and then I’m sorry, I love my childhood friend. The question is why did you do this then, you spent many chapters developing romantic relationships, so that you could then say I love only one? And this is not a pretension that I want a harem, no, but why develop a relationship in order to abandon them like that. As for me, it’s terrible, I didn’t give 1 on everything only because the story really interested me, the beginning and the future process are super. But I'm sorry, I'm dropping this. Whoever reads to the last chapter at the moment, and this is 54, will probably understand that if not, it means we have different views. Very disappointed, I gave stones every day to get this ((((

5mth
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

6mth
Aldrighi
AldrighiLv14

Was surprised by how good the story is. If you are in doubt i suggest you read it because it is very much worth it.

6mth
GAAARP
GAAARPLv4

This a lot more easy to read than the other asoiaf fanfic here, and the story development is looking good for the start. Keep it up author-san his abilities is also interesting probably give him a talent for swordsmanship too. Overall this is highly recommend !!!

6mth
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