VitalStrats

lmao

so he just keeps charging his cavalry headfirst into infantry? probably the biggest waste of their potential. especially considering how expensive they are. isn't the whole point of cavalry to exploit weaknesses? this isn't the Lord of The Rings. Charging directly into fortified infantry while on horseback is litteral suicide.

did you really just go through and comment each time he missed a space? also you got this wrong. "before. You" there's no reason to add a period after You

so when does the mc actually do something instead of making constant threats and just talks? Considering all the "changes" you've made, you are following the show WAAAAAAY too closely for any of it to actually matter.

what happened to Willas and Garlan? the 2 older brothers of Loras?

the Reach is in open rebellion. seems to me you need to remove the leading house and replace them with their rivals in the Reach and make a new loyal "partner". You can easily convince the Tarley to join the crown seeing as their lord has a massuve dislike for the Mace. also I like the Tarleys, they are disciplined and actually competent, the heir Dickon is also a good man to have seeing as he's similar in age to Davith and from what I know a loyal , brave, and good man. In the show when Daenerys attacks them only him and his father stood strong and didn't even flinch.

a token force? he should be sending much more than that.

meanwhile the Starks all having Brown hair as far as I know. Meanwhile here comes Rob, Sansa, and Rickon with red hair. hair color was always such a weird argument.

you really need to work on your dialogue and "insults". they genuinely sound like they were written by a 10 year old who just learned how to swear. Everything else is fine.

very far north? the land of always winter is "very far north" just say very far east, since there are actual other civilizatios in that direction, unlike north. is this your mistake or just another case of ai being complete trash at geography?