I'll be honest, the introduction didn't really give me much motivation to read or was to my liking, as well as the system tag making me a little wary as it's not really something I like, plus it doesn't take place in the original universe. and yes in an AU, that being said I will still make my effort to read this fanfiction and see if I can appreciate it for 2 reasons, 1. you are a great author so you will almost certainly be able to write a good story for this universe and 2. this is one of my favorite animated universes as it has a great story and great elements to be explored, and I have a question since you're doing an avatar fanfiction in Aang's era now, will you do one in Korra's era in the future too?
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1. very cool, I hope the MC meets Korra since her birth so they can create a relationship over time, he could even do something like kidnap Korra as soon as she is born to train her to be his warrior and incomparably powerful daughter or be a childhood friend who convinces her that power is extremely important, making Korra hungry for power and actively seeking it 2. I can't say for others but in my view having a system in the world where there isn't one system for everyone usually breaks power progression in my view as the systems usually come with a lot of rewards for successful missions or punishments for failed missions, in addition to the progression seeming unorganic since the system of perks and advantages that don't make sense for whatever the character is, for example I saw a dragon ball gamer fanfiction where the MC is a sayjin and because of from a system perk he gains Namekian regeneration, in addition to the gamer body that prevents physical injuries and thus saves the protagonist's life in moments when he was supposed to die, so not having a system makes things much more organic and better to read In my opinion, mainly in worlds where power levels are not so well established, of course the exceptions are, for example, a One Piece fanfiction with a system, but this is a special system with some differences, without HP, missions, store and gamer body, It's the only type of system that I like, although it has some advantages, it mainly serves to show the progress and skills that the MC has gained with effort and intelligence, not something he simply gained by luck in something like a gacha system or purchased in a store
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Phew! And here I thought I was off to a bad start. If that's what you people define as systems, then this isn't a system novel. Just as you described, there are no missions, no store, no HP or Gamers body, or gamers mind. It isn't even a gamer fic of any kind. This system there is just a status screen that displays his ability and what he can do. The cheat is a wish bar that can grant him a limited ability before the story even starts. There will be none of that stuff were the MC does tasks and gets rewards. I can read those but I won't write them if i can.
Phew, this is really good I'm going to start reading your fanfiction now, I was reading other updates before, in this fanfiction the MC's love interest will be Ty Lee?
I personally like systems that are well done. Emphasis on the 'well done' part. I think the best example of that would be the Gamer ninja Daichi Hekima. Basically you can gain power but you have to work for it and isn't instantaneously OP. No gacha, no shop, no opening instant dungeons whenever you want. 'muah' chefs kiss.
It’s boring system got overused so bad that it didn’t make sense where some system where alive and that bad stuff
Most systems force the mc to make an decision or have to and it gets annoying always making the mc do something whether be super friendly or just straight up give him op and he still follows it or doesn't change anything
What’s the (in a darker world) fic about also where can I read it, and your other list fics, couldn’t find them in your orginals section
Will he have a harem and smut in the future? Or is it a single female lead
from my perspective, using a system degrades the effort the MC puts into getting his power. it depersonalizes the power progression of the story
Is Azula the lover interest?