Just wanted to post a review of this story so far. I have to say it’s a novel story set in the world all things considered. The MC isn’t rushing off to either join Azula or Aang’s group or even Zuko. The MC’s cheat or “power” is very well balanced and gives him a chance to make a reasonable progression to personal power, while keeping it believable and entertaining. It also allows for further growth in unexpected ways perhaps even leaving room for the MC to grow “OP” but that doesn’t seem to be happening anytime soon at least not without us seeing the MC put in the work to get there. I have really enjoyed reading this work so far and wanted to say thank you to the author for writing it. Having a character explore the Avatar world while working towards a defined end goal is very enjoyable and I hope you keep up the fantastic work. In regards to your comment about people recommending ways Luca could grow his power, have you read the Wandering Prince by sinereal? Personally I find what they have written on energy bending, in their story as well as the interactions with chi and fire to be very interesting and a way Luca could gain other skills, such as running into the two dragons and mastering the different colors of fire. And perhaps the different colors have different aspects of fire. Anyways just a thought but overall, excited to read more and everytime I see a chapter it makes my day.
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