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Binge_Reader69
Binge_Reader69Lv128d
2024-10-16 19:16

not badly written but i cant stand stories where the mc gets put into a world from a show/game and then treats it like it isnt real and the author uses that for character development, its a stupid trope and instantly ruins stories

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Iseeyou
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Yeah I despise that weak kind of writing

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LoserIam
LoserIamLv4

Not trying to glaze, but this is already pretty much one of the best atla fics I have ever read. Now let's analyse why I gave this a 5 star review. Writing quality: 5.0 I don't have my immersion broken in the middle of the chapter, except for the occasional author's note which has done nothing to bother me so far. The grammar is top notch, the spelling is as well and the author doesn't abruptly switch from present to past tense or the other way around. Story development: 5.0 Not too fast nor does it take an eternity to move on which is good. We aren't confused about what is going on either and everything is straight forward or is explained by the Author in detail. We see through the P.O.V of multiple characters which also allows a more immersive read. Character design: 5.0 The MC is well done, he has a clear set of objectives and moral alignments in his head that have been respected (to my knowledge), his power has been established and has been respected or at least, he hasn't gotten a BS power up yet that doesn't align with his original set of powers either which is good and should stay that way. Updating stability: 5.0 Extremely consistent, I don't value the amount of chapters posted in a week (I do very much, but it doesn't factor in this rating) but if it is done consistently (3 chap in a week just to not post the next 4 months for example is what I mean by inconsistency). Summary: It's very good, don't drop this and update soon pls! Otherwise... World Background: 5.0 It's Atla, what did you expect? Besides until now the Author has been faithful to the original in terms of locations and such (correct me if I'm wrong)

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