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089_DalmatiaLv34mth
2024-10-20 13:47

I thought that author somehow will shift the FL and mc demeanor but what the f**k he doing..? Killing his friends by his mother some shitty servents and Guess what...? MC can't even protect them. There are needles plot holes,I am droping this shit. Sorry,author but with these chapters you really did bad, The novels was good with some turmoils,It was really good,but at some point it changed.. From first i enjoyed it even saved at libary....haaa, You really did disappoint me..[img=Why]

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Jacky_DonnieLv3

So what happens? i have read upto 95 chapters. Does MC get Strong enough & Manipulates Villainess or remains her Puppet?

089_DalmatiaLv3

He remains her dog after everything he had gone though... sigh.šŸˆ

Jacky_Donnie:So what happens? i have read upto 95 chapters. Does MC get Strong enough & Manipulates Villainess or remains her Puppet?
ManhwaProtagLv3

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089_Dalmatia:He remains her dog after everything he had gone though... sigh.šŸˆ
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