Mr_ZeroDagger07

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wtf,i just felt this an npc moment where it grant player a quest

this was a good fanfic gone horrible wrong The start version were excellent but the hero version is one of the worst, heavy nerf,he was being side character,you will disappointed later on with this story

this hero version is trash and feels heavy nerf I like anti hero and villain version they are good,now he feels like side character

i hate this version

why is always too much description too much inner monologue too much explanation for single scene

why was he always preparing to leave?? every time someone or something stop him

weeks ??? not days like "weeks" moving around ,wondering does not make sense "days" makes little sense