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IPILv31yr
2023-09-09 05:40

I don't know why but every time I see the blackwatch (I know this is a reference to Overwatch.) I am just thinking of Blackwater. Which is quite fitting coincident for an story about military and dark theme.

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Faux1231
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IPILv3

You aren't wrong. It was still an active warzone they were in. But calling it doing their job was a stretch. Blackwater never had a good track history (Nisour Square massacre, Fallujah, and Najaf, just to name a few, how they killed civilians). Although it is a bit of a stretch to call it the world that's deciding to put the military complex on trial when it is the U.S. DOJ and the U.S. government that decided to hold them accountable rather than let them go. Blackwater never even held that big of a role in the fight. They were just security guards compared to actual U.S. soldiers who fought in Iraq.

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