Item: Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
Rating: 4.6
Author: TheFakeTwix

TheFakeTwixLv141yr

2023-09-30 10:24

Personally I expected it to be another brain dead novel that I was just gonna read for a bit to watch him become stupidly broken or something but It turns out this story is far better than I had thought, the system is very simple yet fun and satisfying at the same time and although it does give him quite a bit of op’ness at the beginning it doesn’t make him invincible and he can’t just do whatever he wants. And i can’t say for sure cause I don’t know much regarding it but it seems like the author did a decent amount of research or already knew about military weapons, vehicles, communication, and forces. Overall I’d say despite not having an incredibly interesting and engaging plot it’s still really good for just enjoyment.

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

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