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mirinda_2712
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2023-08-28 09:03

its a good story but i think it can bee better in the military aspect you have to design oficeer uniforms and get an nco rank structure and maybe get a crest for the company used on documents and as a sybmol and did you take the name blackwatch from the prototype game or is it just a coincidence and as far as i am aware most Europen and American MRES are the same or even better in quality the normal shelf food lets the take the polish one for exaple i am polish its one of the best in the world and could you do a grom polish special forcer unit there are prominely featured as one of the best special forces in the world and if you do them give the polish names pls

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Blackwatch was inspired from Overwatch as it would be easy to explain to the civies that the Blackwatch was a covert private military company blah blah blah. As for the special forces, hmm I do have a plan of using other special forces but it'll have to wait. As for the uniforms, it has been three days so organization is a bit...how should I put this, not that yet organized. There'd be a chapter where the mc will design standard uniform for his men.

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Faux1231:Blackwatch was inspired from Overwatch as it would be easy to explain to the civies that the Blackwatch was a covert private military company blah blah blah. As for the special forces, hmm I do have a plan of using other special forces but it'll have to wait. As for the uniforms, it has been three days so organization is a bit...how should I put this, not that yet organized. There'd be a chapter where the mc will design standard uniform for his men.
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