So, I will preface this by saying I have no love at all of zombie stories. In my experience, most have lazy writing because "Zombies go brrr." luckily, this is NOT that kind of story, and it's clear to see that it is well thought out and a lot of passion is put into this work. TLDR: Solid 9/10, well done 👍Main character: 10/10 The main character is one of the key reasons i love this story so far. Otherr than adapting to his new role a little too quickly to be believable, he is very enjoyable to root for, and also has a backbone and very strong moral compass that is flexable in a believable and interesting way that makes him extremely relateable in my opinion.World building and zombies: 8/10While most of the world building is believable and makes sense, I will say that I am a bit sad that he doesn't explain a little more about the power dynamic in the zombies. by the end of the available chapters (161 of them at time of review), the author has managed to explain it enough during the fights to help me piece it together, but early in the story it can be a bit hard to figure out what exactly the enemy can and cant be affected by, which lost me a little bit as I was unsure why they were making the decisions that they were. This isn't something that ruined the story in the slightest, but it is something I noticed and thought i should mention. Writing: 10ish/10Good grammar and engaging writing made me stay up till 6 in the morning the day after Thanksgiving to read all the available chapters... I think that says enough 😂.Closing thoughts: Overall 9.5/10 Only concern moving forward is the power scaling of where the story can go from here in terms of the zombies, but im sure the author will handle it well as they have the rest of the book, and im looking forward to continuing to read. Thanks for the content, Author! 😁👍

Amazing story if you like Kingdom Building/Army Building it’s right up your alley set in modern times plot is of a zombie/mutant apocalypse the MC can summon troops,buildings,vehicles with his system 10/10 English I am suffering at the moment because I binge read but it has consistent updates about 20 a week wish it was 100 a day though but he’s only human it’s definitely worth reading and adding to your collection hope it doesn’t get dropped also please branch into some Naval units if it wasn’t apart of your plan already :)

So I've read 44 chapters of the novel so far. The plot is good and the main character has an interesting system. I think the author should not sweat the small stuff, for example mentioning the name of the vehicles (because you'll need to Google to get an idea about it), instead I suggest to just emphasis the advantages of the vehicle like the engine is powerful or the armour is strong etcetera... But that beside the point. The writing is good. More thoughts should be invested on individuals interactions. Soldiers monologue is quite good, professionally done. Romance at this stage of the apocalypse will feel forced, so I suggest not to delve into it. The MC purchase currency is Gold, but it's earned by his accomplishments, so why not just call it coins since it's the system's own currency, but doesn't really matter I guess. I'm glad the MC got his troops early on in the story, otherwise it would feel dragged out. The story has promise and the reader can't guess future events easily so that's good. Hopefully the author can update the story more frequently.

I don't know why but every time I see the blackwatch (I know this is a reference to Overwatch.) I am just thinking of Blackwater. Which is quite fitting coincident for an story about military and dark theme.

After chapter 67 i dropped cuz of the ntr type. Although it DIDN'T happen to mc but the main villain had some ntr fetish and i can see him doing something to mc's girl judging by the author writing style so bye. It was a good read but unfortunately im really into the ntr stuff

Epic novel so far I like how he gives us the names of the equipment the mc is using instead of just saying “large military truck” lol keep up the good work

First chapters were great but sadly in later chapters villian and story progression did kill this for me

its a good story but i think it can bee better in the military aspect you have to design oficeer uniforms and get an nco rank structure and maybe get a crest for the company used on documents and as a sybmol and did you take the name blackwatch from the prototype game or is it just a coincidence and as far as i am aware most Europen and American MRES are the same or even better in quality the normal shelf food lets the take the polish one for exaple i am polish its one of the best in the world and could you do a grom polish special forcer unit there are prominely featured as one of the best special forces in the world and if you do them give the polish names pls

Personally I expected it to be another brain dead novel that I was just gonna read for a bit to watch him become stupidly broken or something but It turns out this story is far better than I had thought, the system is very simple yet fun and satisfying at the same time and although it does give him quite a bit of op’ness at the beginning it doesn’t make him invincible and he can’t just do whatever he wants. And i can’t say for sure cause I don’t know much regarding it but it seems like the author did a decent amount of research or already knew about military weapons, vehicles, communication, and forces. Overall I’d say despite not having an incredibly interesting and engaging plot it’s still really good for just enjoyment.