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World_of_Songs
World_of_SongsLv21yr
2023-10-15 19:42

After chapter 67 i dropped cuz of the ntr type. Although it DIDN'T happen to mc but the main villain had some ntr fetish and i can see him doing something to mc's girl judging by the author writing style so bye. It was a good read but unfortunately im really into the ntr stuff

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World_of_Songs
World_of_SongsLv2

Not into ntr stuff*****

Faux1231
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It would be the other way around

World_of_Songs
World_of_SongsLv2

Thanks author for conformation and i hope there will be no NTR relate. And im sure that some of your reader didn't like the idea of mc girl got something to do with the main villain (the china dude). Like im sure the chinese guy have done something to the sword girl. And i know she gonna become mc women but it still leave a bitter taste knowing the chinese dude do something to her. But hey, this is just a suggestion. You may write this cuz it's more realistic and Changing it might effect the storyline. But i think some reader might got a turn off reading this you know..😁

Faux1231:It would be the other way around
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1

exacto

World_of_Songs:Thanks author for conformation and i hope there will be no NTR relate. And im sure that some of your reader didn't like the idea of mc girl got something to do with the main villain (the china dude). Like im sure the chinese guy have done something to the sword girl. And i know she gonna become mc women but it still leave a bitter taste knowing the chinese dude do something to her. But hey, this is just a suggestion. You may write this cuz it's more realistic and Changing it might effect the storyline. But i think some reader might got a turn off reading this you know..😁
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