DeathE

yup

Aenys as in the body part? .............

I thought the beginning was alright, not great not bad. But around middle it just got a bit wierd, some details were skipped over, he repeats himself about pizza maybe 6 or 7 times at camp half blood, and immediately after that it changed to a bullet point format like the other guy said. "Letter from hogwarts" blah blah blah "The Departure" Blah blah blah Overall, a bit disappointing.

Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs

+1

please reply when there is a new chapter 🙏