Great so far, i just hope that you won't make him become a human semi-permanently. Which 90% of the stories on this platform does to every non-human main character.
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Unless it's a cat, every other non human creature must turn to their humanoid form. It's only fine if it's a Cat. That's clearly superior to all of those species!
If you can make a lasting, logical and entertaining plot say it, I think the path of the human form at least gives more plot to the story than just a dragon which has no parallel in GOT
If by making a logical and entertaining plot by overwriting said summary into a belivable tale of how a instinctual intelligent and sapient monster somehow takes the human form for the sake of not being lonely not being a thing.. i might actually do that. Don't get me wrong though but for the sake of logic, would you actually go and say that monster mc stories without a cannonical creature for said world need to become more "human"? (I doubt i can write better than the author, i am a reader who has spent years reading, not writing. Hence 5 stars, one of the better writers on this platform.)
Gabichu_Yeah:If you can make a lasting, logical and entertaining plot say it, I think the path of the human form at least gives more plot to the story than just a dragon which has no parallel in GOT
My comment was based on the fact that I only really read 2 or 3 novels where the MC was a monster from start to finish with an acceptable and entertaining plot, the rest unfortunately start great but as time goes by it gets boring and repetitive, I have not read this yet but I am talking about everything I read previously on this platform and others
QuiteSarcastic:If by making a logical and entertaining plot by overwriting said summary into a belivable tale of how a instinctual intelligent and sapient monster somehow takes the human form for the sake of not being lonely not being a thing.. i might actually do that. Don't get me wrong though but for the sake of logic, would you actually go and say that monster mc stories without a cannonical creature for said world need to become more "human"? (I doubt i can write better than the author, i am a reader who has spent years reading, not writing. Hence 5 stars, one of the better writers on this platform.)
I can get behind that really, the genre is one of my favorites so far, and i have read/listened to plenty of the genre and most ends up with the story spiraling around making it into some kind of sympathy seeking contest from other females. And other things that actually manages to ruin a very good book in matter of chapters.
Gabichu_Yeah:My comment was based on the fact that I only really read 2 or 3 novels where the MC was a monster from start to finish with an acceptable and entertaining plot, the rest unfortunately start great but as time goes by it gets boring and repetitive, I have not read this yet but I am talking about everything I read previously on this platform and others
So many languages... And you decided to talk with the truth....
QuiteSarcastic:I can get behind that really, the genre is one of my favorites so far, and i have read/listened to plenty of the genre and most ends up with the story spiraling around making it into some kind of sympathy seeking contest from other females. And other things that actually manages to ruin a very good book in matter of chapters.
Do you want a dragon the size of a hill or mountain to remain in its true form?! Gone mad?! The protagonist has never used his full power, if used he destroys Westeros.
QuiteSarcastic:I can get behind that really, the genre is one of my favorites so far, and i have read/listened to plenty of the genre and most ends up with the story spiraling around making it into some kind of sympathy seeking contest from other females. And other things that actually manages to ruin a very good book in matter of chapters.
just have him capable of shrinking then i always found it sad that monster-fic tend to give up on the genre main point by turning the mc human, if you need him biped at least make him/her a dragonewt or the equivalent don't just make him a human with dragon pieces sticking out its lazy, and overdone by this point.
Febfew:Do you want a dragon the size of a hill or mountain to remain in its true form?! Gone mad?! The protagonist has never used his full power, if used he destroys Westeros.
It is fine so far as in this book so far (chapter 31) I doesn’t seem to ruin the book unlike many other book.
Who is the fml?
read " Custom monster system " by loskro. he stays a monster the entire time
