Febfew

It's great to have more chapters; I like it when there are more chapters; I want more chapters; more chapters are necessary; I demand more chapters! Author! More chapters!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I find it hard to believe that people like you exist; it’s pathetic. Apparently, wanting exclusivity and reciprocity is wrong now. Look at the state humanity has reached... It would be better to reset the Earth all over again.

That ending is cruel.

Are you an author who can't handle criticism? Is this really the life you want? I’m not lying, I’m not trying to annoy you into doing exactly what I want, I’m not being a hater, and I’m not being an idiot about things you’d already warned would or wouldn't be in the fanfic. I simply exercised my right as a reader and pointed out flaws in the writing. Because the story raises an obvious question: he possesses the memories of an incredibly powerful Dou Sheng—memories that clearly had a massive impact on his mindset—yet he acts with absolute recklessness. So, how did that Dou Sheng reach the pinnacle of power? Just because the plot said so?

This plot is becoming ridiculous and contradictory. One moment, the protagonist acts in line with the context—balancing the reincarnated soul and the old Dou Sheng, where the latter *should* be pragmatic and exert greater psychological influence, at least for a few years. The next moment, he’s just like those other protagonists who are as sensitive as babies, diving headfirst into situations that are a total waste of time—all just to drive the plot forward and provide an enemy to serve as "extra inspiration." This waste of time is simply unnecessary; if the plot had focused on a scheme to rob the entire sect and then hunt down Xiao Yun’s women and suitors, it would have been far more interesting and innovative than *this*.

I got it, thanks. 👍

I looked around the site but couldn't find an option for a free membership. Is that option only available in the app?

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Author, you are incredibly talented. I’m already looking forward to seeing your skills improve even further and watching you create your own original stories in a few years—stories where I imagine every chapter will be a highlight. In this fanfic, I can already see talent suited for the harem, romance, action, adventure, school life, and slice-of-life genres.

If the protagonist gets their hands on the sacred weapons from DxD—or weapons and items with similar concepts, like being the nemesis of evil—Sukuna is going to be in deep trouble. There are some truly absurd weapons out there; those from Warhammer 40k are a prime example. I’m certain many could be classified as Rank A, but their effect is simple: one hit, one kill.