Febfew

I'm sad about not having a harem, I like a harem with realism because it has its dramas. But I liked it because you seem to be well prepared. I just advise you to be careful with the MC's power scale.

I haven't read the fanfic yet, but I just have two questions: 1st, is there a harem, right? According to the synopsis and race of the MC, the harem matches a lot. 2nd there have been several fanfics with vampires and werewolves in medieval environments (Tge Witcher, GoT, etc.) and several have been abandoned, so how confident are you in continuing? [Translation]

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I had already seen several "magic/power systems" (at least I call them that), but this is the most innovative, complete and simple, but no less impressive and clearly has "tricks" within it that are not immediately noticeable. I wrote several stories (I didn't complete any of them, too much perfectionism...) and Before, I was based on modifications of the Narutoverse or different compositions between Narutoverse, Chakra (real life, I think it's called Kundalini) and various anime/manga stories (Japanese and Korean) and Chinese stories (wuxia, xianxia, xuanhuan). This one made me realize I was limiting myself. Very good.

This is a fanfic with a lot of potential, if it's not a translation... But if it's not a translation, I ask the author to pay special attention to Overlord's plot and his own so as not to have meaningless errors.

Friend, use Google Translate like me. And keep in mind that languages have differences, even I know she/he in Indonesian is the same word, so you would need to pay attention to these differences if you want to communicate with everyone.

Other suggestions = search for naruto maps and similar things on Google. There are many places and characters that can be explored and developed because Kishimoto didn't develop them, he just mentioned or gave a simple context that can be expanded.

Some suggestions author= The MC needs to strengthen the crows he created, they are currently too weak for the context of the Naruto verse. The 5 that were shown fighting Hidan must be strengthened to at least have the ability of a Kage to actually be useful, with one of them in the Land of Demons (this is not unreasonable considering the power of Akatsuki and each of the 5 villages main ninja). Furthermore I suggest that another 10~30 should be created (with power equal to those who fought against Hidan) and strengthen some of the crow clan to be more useful. I also suggest that he develop conceptual powers, including creating skills so that he doesn't need to spend DP with every gesture he makes. And lastly, it does not depend on the Pure Land, a deity that does not even have its own "paradise" is not a deity.

Giving a helping hand and hoping to reach 50 chapters. Keep up the good work and don't forget to proofread your story so you don't make meaningless mistakes. Good luck! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Aretuza is not in Redania, it is on an island off the coast of Temeria. More precisely on the border with Velen, and close to Novigrad, but it does not appear on any official map of the game or book as far as I know.