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Since she started her other fanfic, the updates for this one have become slower...And it was a great chapter, all that's missing is for the protagonist to drag him into the dungeon and give him an intensive course on the current empire and part of its past.
I think there's already been something like this, talking about basic sanitation in Crete, but I could be wrong because this is the 2nd or 3rd fanfic that features the themes of Crete and modern basic sanitation for that historical period.
Alexander's library in Egypt was destroyed by Julius Caesar during a military campaign. This was used as a distraction to attack Alexandria. (Note: I'm not sure if I'm correct). Furthermore, the protagonist has already begun construction of a huge library in Crete, including the translation of numerous books and the printing of Bibles in several languages.
If the MC's power is to be distributed, then acts of death, saving others from death, or having their fate changed by them should be valid as points in the system. And obviously, the protagonist shouldn't be threatened by the power that came from him, as Otsutsuki Kaguya was.
Author, the part about the Targaryens never getting sick is a lie. Go to Wikipedia and see the cause of death of the Targaryens from the time of Jahaerys I and during Aegon V's childhood. Furthermore, Aegon V only became king because of the illness that plagued the kingdom during his adolescence.
He's the author, not the translator. And he's using Yi Ti and the little information available about her to begin the magical part of the story. Especially since the most magical place after Valyria is the Land of Shadows.
Man, this is getting frustrating. I'm going to put this fanfic aside and come back at the end of next month.
It's an interesting story, and I'm sure many will read it, but the reincarnation of a character who already exists is boring. We already know a lot about him; seeing something unknown, closer to our reality in another context, is more interesting. For example, if it were a human reincarnated with the body of the ruler in 40K, the whole context would be much more fun (difficulties, differences, adaptation to the new scenario and power, "remnants" of the ruler in the body, the interaction with the new world of 40K and vice versa). That's my opinion.
The frequency of chapters has decreased; if it were at the same pace as before, we would have already seen Guilliman ;( Not that I really care about him, but I wanted to see the conclusion of this part soon.
The protagonist is a user of The Gamer system; the race for someone with this type of power is a matter of focused development time, amount of power, and especially opinion/choice...