Item: A True Dragon in GOT
Rating: 3
Author: Irgendwe

IrgendweLv41yr

2023-06-25 21:19

The idea is good, but it's execution is not. I can't complain about updating stability but about everything else. The Grammar needs some work, it is readable but there are many mistakes. The World makes barely any sense, it feels like the Author just likes to exaggerate. He describes Valyria as a city that could hold 'hundrets of millions of people' and his colony of kobolds grows to have several million even though they only live on a small part of Valyria. The Author also loves to do timeskips, whether that is with impossibly long flight times (several days to cross Valyria on a dragon / over a week to fly to the Westerlands from Valyria, when a boat needed 1-2 months) and him just skipping most of the MCs aging. In one chapter he's under 10 y/o the next he is 1000+ y/o and hasn't grown mentally. He always talks about being superior to humans in regards to intelligence and other stuff, but doesn't show it. And these are just Points I don't like, there are more points: - MC can turn into human - MC lives with humans - MC pretty much ignores the kobolds that are under him in favour of humans for no apparent reason and more that I either forgot or haven't gotten to yet as I am still on Chapter 22 I'll maybe write a comment to Update this

A True Dragon in GOT

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