I read up to ch.35 and all i can say is I'm completely disappointed with this ff and there are just too many things to complain about but I'll list all of the ones that i can remember soo far: 1. The english is overall okay there are some mistakes but you can easily understand what they are supposed to mean 2. Logic is thrown in the trash 3. Some events feel forced 4. 1 or 2 weird a*s pulls 5. The story is written in a way that is convenient for the author instead of mc 6. An AI that does things on its own and hides info from its creator 7. Everyone is suddenly stupid and glosses over everything the mc does 8. The author's information isn't completely clear so he mixed info of iron man 2-3 together 9. It's supposed to be a modern family ff mixed with other tv shows but soo far it's just a Wednesday ff 10. The mc became a watcher, so he doesn't mind loved ones getting hurt if it helps the plot stay the same (even though he already changed some of it) 11. The way the mc solves issues is really weird Overall unless i completely turn off my brain this ff is frustrating af even though it had its good moments If someone needs examples of any of these points just ask so i can elaborate on it since it would take forever to fit it all here.
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Yea, the beggining and even mid chapters weren't the best, but thus Fanfic is kind if like of progress diary cause if you see the reviews of the people that have read to the newest chapters they all like it
There will always be ppl that either love a ff or hate it. To those who liked it after reading till latest chapter (83) then good for them for having a lot of patience. I gave it a try and read almost half the chaps but didn't get hooked, some people drop after 1 or 2 chaps so even if it actually gets better after 70 chaps(even though I'm not sure the issues i listed are gonna be solved) not many people like playing the long/masochistic game of torturing/enduring chaps they don't like to end up with a chance of a maybe better results. In the end it is what it is and have a good day.
Karate_master_b:Yea, the beggining and even mid chapters weren't the best, but thus Fanfic is kind if like of progress diary cause if you see the reviews of the people that have read to the newest chapters they all like it
For people who don't understand what he wrote: "Now read it, it's not even well done, the ending is not well done, and apart from that, the story is very forced, the story feels very idiotic"
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ty bro , what i hate the most is the author saying the story will get better , also the ai hiding info from his creator is a huge turn of
Kurama24:For people who don't understand what he wrote: "Now read it, it's not even well done, the ending is not well done, and apart from that, the story is very forced, the story feels very idiotic"
Thanks. Most of this I could tolerate, but it's annoying when other characters casually gloss over things or when everything is written to be convenient for the Author - it is unrealistic and a little off-putting, I despise it when Authors make an AI that hides information and stuff - one of the main reasons I'm not a fan of Rimuru's Ciel from Tensura, and the big one - an MC that allows those close to them to suffer to 'preserve canon' are idiots that should be reincarnated into Boku No Pico. How stupid do you have to be to allow those you care for to suffer to preserve an already destroyed plot because of your mere existence, not to mention your interactions with said person - I'd get it if it was something like being in Dragon Ball and allowing Krillin and others to die a few times because without it, Goku would not get so strong and there would be irreparable damage, or allowing for - say, Peter Parker to lose Uncle Ben since it plays a MASSIVE role in making him who he is and without Spider-man, many would suffer and die, but other stuff is just dumb af.
MythicalFanFicGod:Thanks. Most of this I could tolerate, but it's annoying when other characters casually gloss over things or when everything is written to be convenient for the Author - it is unrealistic and a little off-putting, I despise it when Authors make an AI that hides information and stuff - one of the main reasons I'm not a fan of Rimuru's Ciel from Tensura, and the big one - an MC that allows those close to them to suffer to 'preserve canon' are idiots that should be reincarnated into Boku No Pico. How stupid do you have to be to allow those you care for to suffer to preserve an already destroyed plot because of your mere existence, not to mention your interactions with said person - I'd get it if it was something like being in Dragon Ball and allowing Krillin and others to die a few times because without it, Goku would not get so strong and there would be irreparable damage, or allowing for - say, Peter Parker to lose Uncle Ben since it plays a MASSIVE role in making him who he is and without Spider-man, many would suffer and die, but other stuff is just dumb af.
