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EndlessVoid
EndlessVoidLv141yr
2023-05-08 11:05

I wanted to like this Im always up for some slice of life type fics. throwing Wednesday into modern family that's fine. I mean he can build iron man armor so basic supernatural so the armor has a use sure I could enjoy that. however the first supernatural is an unkillable infinitely evolving monster and there will be more. you made the first supernatural enemy a final boss? then the slice of life aspect has gone I mean seriously the title is in modern family as iron man. and there is little to nothing about a chill slice of life sitcom.

Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!

Karate_master_b
4.2
200 Chs

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covestar
covestarLv14

That was my main problem with it as well, I was expecting slice of life, and at first I did not mind the supernatural and fiction bs, but now it got too much that there is no more slice of life and dude either seems to be building something or fighting some supernatural being, the story is losing the touch of when I first read it, I hope the author slowly reverts back to that slice of life feel. And I understand adding the fighting and supernatural bs since he literally has abilities that are not meant for the world, but I just wish that it would not be every day full of battle and no slice of life.

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Karate_master_b
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Hey there guys, I made this fanfic mainly due to the lack of updates by another Author on modern family, So I got impatient waiting and decided to write one myself. I hope you guys can point out any mistakes I may have made in the Chapters and where I can improve them. Otherwise leave a comment letting me know you enjoyed the chapter, it's a great motivator. Enjoy the Chapters that are to come. For your Information, the Story will begin to have changes but in the first season atleast nothing Major. But the later seasons is where the Fun is at. 🥳

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Fito
FitoLv5

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AmarHazlin
AmarHazlinLv4

your title is REALLY misleading me here when MOST of the novel progress in the wednesday universe. as much as i love the series, I'm here for modern family fanfic and there's not much development in that family in this regard overall a VERY frustrating and Rush development honestly not recommended

1yr
Topo_15
Topo_15Lv4

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Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

I read up to ch.35 and all i can say is I'm completely disappointed with this ff and there are just too many things to complain about but I'll list all of the ones that i can remember soo far: 1. The english is overall okay there are some mistakes but you can easily understand what they are supposed to mean 2. Logic is thrown in the trash 3. Some events feel forced 4. 1 or 2 weird a*s pulls 5. The story is written in a way that is convenient for the author instead of mc 6. An AI that does things on its own and hides info from its creator 7. Everyone is suddenly stupid and glosses over everything the mc does 8. The author's information isn't completely clear so he mixed info of iron man 2-3 together 9. It's supposed to be a modern family ff mixed with other tv shows but soo far it's just a Wednesday ff 10. The mc became a watcher, so he doesn't mind loved ones getting hurt if it helps the plot stay the same (even though he already changed some of it) 11. The way the mc solves issues is really weird Overall unless i completely turn off my brain this ff is frustrating af even though it had its good moments If someone needs examples of any of these points just ask so i can elaborate on it since it would take forever to fit it all here.

1yr
Hoptitu_007
Hoptitu_007Lv3

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BrunooT
BrunooTLv5

This story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work. I will be supporting in any way I can.

1yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

Your story is not bad but I expected something related to the modern family and putting so much supernatural doesn't add up and your system is too overpowered basically you can bend reality to your liking (makes appear what you want) good luck with your story

1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

It was good until the frog came in then it just got boring. I feel like other stuff should have been added in slowly. Also after the first few chapters it’s really not even a modern family fic anymore

1yr
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