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Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv31yr
2023-06-24 11:25

It was good until the frog came in then it just got boring. I feel like other stuff should have been added in slowly. Also after the first few chapters it’s really not even a modern family fic anymore

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Karate_master_b
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Your right i feel like i rushed into it and i could have introduced those elements more smoothly specifically the frog, Still Thanks for Reading the fanfic all the way to that point.

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