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Fito
FitoLv52yr
2022-12-12 11:50

It has an interesting beginning, but the fact that the mc can make anything appear takes away the meaning of the story, it seems that he doesn't need money, he only makes a laptop, a car or a cell phone appear, the plot is also a mixture of sitcom, science fiction and supernatural things, so it's better to say that the mc is a magician who can alter reality at his convenience.

Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!

Karate_master_b
4.2
200 Chs

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KasukabeDe
KasukabeDeLv3

Being honest you are absolutely right and the fact that he buy supply from the system is what makes it worse in that sense...I mean, why would you buy the stuff from the system if you can get all the materials? Unless you need a specific one, I don't see the point of that. And the second thing is...why does he do everything like Tony? I feel that the mc is not being completely original with his creations and is only copying and changing a little. So I don't see the original.

1yr
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KasukabeDe
KasukabeDeLv3

And I forgot to mention that he has almost the same swagger as Tony, so yeah, he's not original.

1yr
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1nTroll
1nTrollLv3

A regular sit-com novel mixed with the supernatural is never a good thing.

1yr
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KasukabeDe
KasukabeDeLv3

Yes, honestly it is very difficult to find one that is well structured, with good calligraphy, etc.

1nTroll:A regular sit-com novel mixed with the supernatural is never a good thing.
1yr
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Arron_Smith
Arron_SmithLv4

what does James look like?

1yr
1
_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv11

Like an anime protagonist

Arron_Smith:what does James look like?
1yr
3
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN
I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv11

True it wpuld have been better if he made them himself using the things around him

1yr
1
romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14

The entire concept is just dumb. Maybe 10 years ago the idea might have made you wonder, not now when Marvel is continually flopping and Modern Family is rerun so often that it’s arguably helping to kill cable

KasukabeDe:Being honest you are absolutely right and the fact that he buy supply from the system is what makes it worse in that sense...I mean, why would you buy the stuff from the system if you can get all the materials? Unless you need a specific one, I don't see the point of that. And the second thing is...why does he do everything like Tony? I feel that the mc is not being completely original with his creations and is only copying and changing a little. So I don't see the original.
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Karate_master_b
Karate_master_bAuthor

Hey there guys, I made this fanfic mainly due to the lack of updates by another Author on modern family, So I got impatient waiting and decided to write one myself. I hope you guys can point out any mistakes I may have made in the Chapters and where I can improve them. Otherwise leave a comment letting me know you enjoyed the chapter, it's a great motivator. Enjoy the Chapters that are to come. For your Information, the Story will begin to have changes but in the first season atleast nothing Major. But the later seasons is where the Fun is at. 🥳

2yr

AmarHazlin
AmarHazlinLv4

your title is REALLY misleading me here when MOST of the novel progress in the wednesday universe. as much as i love the series, I'm here for modern family fanfic and there's not much development in that family in this regard overall a VERY frustrating and Rush development honestly not recommended

1yr
Topo_15
Topo_15Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

I read up to ch.35 and all i can say is I'm completely disappointed with this ff and there are just too many things to complain about but I'll list all of the ones that i can remember soo far: 1. The english is overall okay there are some mistakes but you can easily understand what they are supposed to mean 2. Logic is thrown in the trash 3. Some events feel forced 4. 1 or 2 weird a*s pulls 5. The story is written in a way that is convenient for the author instead of mc 6. An AI that does things on its own and hides info from its creator 7. Everyone is suddenly stupid and glosses over everything the mc does 8. The author's information isn't completely clear so he mixed info of iron man 2-3 together 9. It's supposed to be a modern family ff mixed with other tv shows but soo far it's just a Wednesday ff 10. The mc became a watcher, so he doesn't mind loved ones getting hurt if it helps the plot stay the same (even though he already changed some of it) 11. The way the mc solves issues is really weird Overall unless i completely turn off my brain this ff is frustrating af even though it had its good moments If someone needs examples of any of these points just ask so i can elaborate on it since it would take forever to fit it all here.

1yr
Hoptitu_007
Hoptitu_007Lv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr
BrunooT
BrunooTLv5

This story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work. I will be supporting in any way I can.

2yr
EndlessVoid
EndlessVoidLv14

I wanted to like this Im always up for some slice of life type fics. throwing Wednesday into modern family that's fine. I mean he can build iron man armor so basic supernatural so the armor has a use sure I could enjoy that. however the first supernatural is an unkillable infinitely evolving monster and there will be more. you made the first supernatural enemy a final boss? then the slice of life aspect has gone I mean seriously the title is in modern family as iron man. and there is little to nothing about a chill slice of life sitcom.

1yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

Your story is not bad but I expected something related to the modern family and putting so much supernatural doesn't add up and your system is too overpowered basically you can bend reality to your liking (makes appear what you want) good luck with your story

1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

It was good until the frog came in then it just got boring. I feel like other stuff should have been added in slowly. Also after the first few chapters it’s really not even a modern family fic anymore

1yr
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