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Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv22yr
2023-02-01 03:31

Your story is not bad but I expected something related to the modern family and putting so much supernatural doesn't add up and your system is too overpowered basically you can bend reality to your liking (makes appear what you want) good luck with your story

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Darknester
DarknesterLv2

Man,the mc use all his points just to know a Information that Don't help in nothing..... So the system could be op,but the mc is dumb.

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