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RafaelMitz
RafaelMitzLv32yr
2022-07-10 05:01

What you need to know before reading: - The protagonist is not super OP, reincarnated with SSS+ talent, he doesn't have a super strong system, he doesn't find a divine artifact that improves his body, he won't be the strongest in the kingdom in chapter 100... The protagonist reincarnates in a body with low talent for magic but, with his superior knowledge of the past life, he will surpass all others. - Because of the above, the pace of the story is a little slow, and that's fine with me. The protagonist's strength building is more realistic. He will also learn new things, after all he now has the theory and practice of magic. - The protagonist's personality is a bit arrogant... ...ok, fine! he is arrogant. But as the chapters go by, this characteristic diminishes and stays at a good level. After all, he reached the top of magical theories in his past life without having magic! So it's normal for him to be a little arrogant, isn't it? - From what I read, I believe that the protagonist is not a good guy and not a bad guy. I think he is aligned with the "neutral". If he has to kill, he will kill, but he's not a psychopath. - At the beginning of the work, the author is a little lacking in the physical descriptions of the characters, making it difficult and even impossible to visualize them mentally. His mother's mental image is a woman with big balloons where she suffocates the mc. Later the author improves in this area, so rest assured. - The protagonist will not be a lone wolf. He will have allies. Stay calm! They will not be burdens. - The writing is good. It is still necessary to know more things about the world... Cultures, regions, religions if they exist... I don't know if there are other races like elves, dwarves, etc, but it's at the beginning of the work so that's for later. - There are some "Slice of Life" parts in the story that are nice and funny. They help you relax a little and not overwhelm readers with information at all times. hmmm I think that's it for now. This review was based up to chapter 150. Keep up the good work, author. ^^

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RafaelMitz
RafaelMitzLv3

btw, maybe it is advisable to change the cover of the book? As it is not a hot woman in lingerie showing off her curves, people may think that the girl is the protagonist of the work. I don't know, I could be talking nonsense.

Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Hmm... you do have a point there. I'll look into that, thanks.

RafaelMitz:btw, maybe it is advisable to change the cover of the book? As it is not a hot woman in lingerie showing off her curves, people may think that the girl is the protagonist of the work. I don't know, I could be talking nonsense.
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks a lot! I truly appreciate this kind and honest review I'm very very happy about this, I'm even going to sticky it. Once again, thanks. I'll work on the story more to bring more quality. It's going to be an amazing ride!

TrackShadow
TrackShadowLv4

Do you know any lone wolf mc novel. No harem please

Mastarius
MastariusLv2

not a good guy not a bad guy but neutral... i say he is a bad guy ! haha

dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

thats for telling me he is not selfish enough or a lone wolf,I can skip this novel

michibadgurl
michibadgurlLv4

Which chapters did romance finalky starts? Like when FL appears?

Chatwriter
ChatwriterLv12

real question here are you a retard by any chance? “Let’s have a random woman as the cover of my novel” “how could anyone possibly think she’s the mc”

Magecrafter:Hmm... you do have a point there. I'll look into that, thanks.
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

It's been a year since I wrote that so I've forgotten about the context, but I think it was some sort of joke.I think back then the book's cover was a girl (Ciara Epilson), so some people might have thought she was the MC And when the reader mentioned something and lingerie or something (which represents the kinds of book covers that were popular back then, and still are... though I don't use those kinds of covers), I think we were kidding around.It's been a while, so I can't quite remember the details.

Chatwriter:real question here are you a retard by any chance? “Let’s have a random woman as the cover of my novel” “how could anyone possibly think she’s the mc”
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Woshi_001
Woshi_001Lv4

Harem??

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Magecrafter
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After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review. Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias. It’s a wonderful and interesting story. I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here. As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things. [Sp0iler Alert] *Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers* Firstly; The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally. Secondly; The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobility Thirdly; Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly; The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actions Lastly; The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review. Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be. That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character more He’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MC He behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this. Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic. The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standards But, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed. Answer 3: This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie. If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route. As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out. Answer 4: The MC is very smart. If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well. Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence. Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MC Unknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action. Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid. Answer 5: At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters. But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced. I certainly hope you enjoy this story. Cheers

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