I’m confused about the lack of 1 stars, does author just remove reviews? Fatal flaws of this novel -Author bastardizes the narrative. Alot of the ideas are good but a lot are too drawn out, too skipped, and author LOVES lying as the narrator. Also the writing of the novel is like the author picking the writing style he likes from 1000 different novels and applying it to a certain specific paragraph each time. Author has no consistent style. Am I getting Japanese Beta MC or Xianxia ruthless psycho this chapter? I don’t know! -The amount of times MC bulges his eyes each chapter. Author must have a kink for bulging eyes. -The amount of people who stutter. A trained assassin stuttering one word? Mc stutters a lot too. -The collosal amount of CRINGE. -The amount of chapters wasted for useless events. Why would they even steal food for WHAT? -Author doesnt build on how to do spells. No explanation just heres a fireball.
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LIKEWhat couldve been interesting in this novel: How he develops the quintiple spell and what exactly does it do? Time skipped How he develops the Mana Shock and what did his past life memory help him? Time skipped How he developed his card what materials are they from where did he source it how much mana did he take from the lake? Time skipped The fundamental difference of him having one core and having cores in his brain make him think faster/ smarter etc. Skipped again Having the familiars be something the readers will adore? Skipped they are reduced to numerals! The author seems to like to “surprise” the audience but remember, the main premise is that the MC is a Sage. The premise shouldve been for him to impress the readers with his thought processes and innovations, not to shock the readers! Authors writing style and fantasies conflict with the main premise. The author sacrifices the developmentary phase of his magic. Do we even know how he made a fireball? I don’t think so he just explained SCIENCE not MAGIC. Does the Core colors levels matter? No they are skipped too we don’t know the difference!! Does the core grades matter? No we ALSO don’t know the difference we just know only rainbow ones matter for the plot!
And i assure you author. No reader is SHOCKED by anything so far. They are just annoyed
Gian_Carpio:What couldve been interesting in this novel: How he develops the quintiple spell and what exactly does it do? Time skipped How he develops the Mana Shock and what did his past life memory help him? Time skipped How he developed his card what materials are they from where did he source it how much mana did he take from the lake? Time skipped The fundamental difference of him having one core and having cores in his brain make him think faster/ smarter etc. Skipped again Having the familiars be something the readers will adore? Skipped they are reduced to numerals! The author seems to like to “surprise” the audience but remember, the main premise is that the MC is a Sage. The premise shouldve been for him to impress the readers with his thought processes and innovations, not to shock the readers! Authors writing style and fantasies conflict with the main premise. The author sacrifices the developmentary phase of his magic. Do we even know how he made a fireball? I don’t think so he just explained SCIENCE not MAGIC. Does the Core colors levels matter? No they are skipped too we don’t know the difference!! Does the core grades matter? No we ALSO don’t know the difference we just know only rainbow ones matter for the plot!
Duly noted, dear reader. Thanks for pointing out flaws in this novel. I could argue about a few things you have said, but I don't think there's any point. I was a pretty young and inexperienced author when I started Spellcraft, so forgive me if the story isn't to your taste. It gets better for the most part, and the end of Part 1 is actually pretty satisfying. Thanks for your time.
Gian_Carpio:What couldve been interesting in this novel: How he develops the quintiple spell and what exactly does it do? Time skipped How he develops the Mana Shock and what did his past life memory help him? Time skipped How he developed his card what materials are they from where did he source it how much mana did he take from the lake? Time skipped The fundamental difference of him having one core and having cores in his brain make him think faster/ smarter etc. Skipped again Having the familiars be something the readers will adore? Skipped they are reduced to numerals! The author seems to like to “surprise” the audience but remember, the main premise is that the MC is a Sage. The premise shouldve been for him to impress the readers with his thought processes and innovations, not to shock the readers! Authors writing style and fantasies conflict with the main premise. The author sacrifices the developmentary phase of his magic. Do we even know how he made a fireball? I don’t think so he just explained SCIENCE not MAGIC. Does the Core colors levels matter? No they are skipped too we don’t know the difference!! Does the core grades matter? No we ALSO don’t know the difference we just know only rainbow ones matter for the plot!