TrackShadow

feels AI generated. the story is not following the original plot and scenes.

i like it. he has just started out. I fell he will create techniques from the ones he uses in the future.

it's just bad writing. very bad. its like you are writing something, then suddenly you thought, het wouldn't this be interesting and then you introduce s new character, new plot, just haphazard.

he didn't train meditation, dagger, bow, any combat arts, the magic combat style of devin that interested him. its like reading a monotonous diary of a retired old man, wanting to learn some magic as hobby before his death

isn't he already 28 or something. how is he still still a little child mentally

what the hell, I can't even understand what's going on

I am out. braindead

why man, why? such good plot. totally forcing a plot. not even one month and boom carol knows, then somebody else....all knows and this supposed to be genius was thinking of better hiding his features. shit

steaming pile of shit. if the warnings are the welcome flags to you, jump into it, the writing style is not TOO bad.

ah shit