TrackShadow

steaming pile of shit. if the warnings are the welcome flags to you, jump into it, the writing style is not TOO bad.

ah shit

thanks for the update. but the quality has dropped. you seem to want to dig deep regarding his existence, consequences of his actions etc, but the personality seems to have changed a lot within such a few chapters that the story feels disconnected. he has a mature mind but lately seems to act in a way as if he wants to prove to himself that he is a teenager .

you are becoming what you are meant to be you don't know what you want same dialogue again and again looks like AI

man I sincerely wish emma myers as his gf. man nothing against Ariel winter. but just because. since he is mature, he may not be seeing alex, and the other girls now as potential lover. he may help them be themselves and give them support, but romance with the very first female friends are overused and nowhere it is said the female lead should be from the cast.

well, there are no shortage of topics to write about. wish u best of luck to keep writing 😊. Harry Potter (with different spells etc. griffyndor is overused. maybe as snape during him as student or others. other types of speels are not explored, without the character becoming too op too quickly), mha but with mc having erasure quirk(a better version of shota, hidden from others etc, as an antihero alongwith one or two more, but not too op like insight, anti(cloning, stealing, copying, erasure) and may be wind, mist, beast breathing (from demon slayer) and regeneration). these were some of my ideas. keep going. waiting new chapters, new novels etc.👍

how about mcu fafic with powers from Naruto. not overly op. start from very basic . I actually read something like that sometimes ago, but it went to total shit very fast

no you did not. maybe the comments are harsh, but that's the truth. ... but if it is really something you want to write, go ahead, seriously. there are always people who matches your mindset. but it is not for me. iIwaited for a good read, and then shit. what was the use of his mind being protected?

excellent story, but little bit ruined by all the s*x stuff

maybe create some tech . Peter Parker is a genius. how far can they go together. maybe spar, etc. maybe they can learn things from each other