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Mactiremor
MactiremorLv142yr
2022-06-16 07:49

At first when I started reading this novel, I was going in blind, sort off. Only glossed over the synopsis and was interesting enough so I started to read. I was surprised about the subtle plot twists and turns, it betrayed every expectation I had, truly a nice surprise. What I like most about this novel is the suspension, it really held me on the edge of my seat. The MC is also very smart and calculating, another plus. As I'm writing this review from chapter 42, I'm curious to see how this story develops. Anyways author-san, keep up the good work!

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks for your kind and honest reviews. I'm happy you enjoyed the read. I'll try my hardest to keep improving too! Once again, thank. I really appreciate this.

Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks*

The_Last_Native
The_Last_NativeLv15

Romance?

Magecrafter:Thanks*
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Yes. But that comes after the timeskip when they stop being 12 year old kids.

The_Last_Native:Romance?
Xander_Vick
Xander_VickLv13

Im on chapter 460, and MC is saying magic is his only love. Does that mean there is no romance?

hocine_Ben
hocine_BenLv1

Is the novel a harem?

Aqua_Blu
Aqua_BluLv14

Master Yi approves

Krishna_Choubey
Krishna_ChoubeyLv2

Magecrafter:Yes. But that comes after the timeskip when they stop being 12 year old kids.
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

There’s still a Loli character…

Krishna_Choubey:
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Uknowme
UknowmeLv14

the guy in the cover page is the main lead ? or the blue haired guy?

Magecrafter:There’s still a Loli character…
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

The guy in the cover

Uknowme:the guy in the cover page is the main lead ? or the blue haired guy?
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv13

harem? or if it's just a fml, is she a Yandere?

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

chapter 460 and romance still hasn't started? story isn't for me then.

Xander_Vick:Im on chapter 460, and MC is saying magic is his only love. Does that mean there is no romance?
Otaku_Network_7169
Otaku_Network_7169Lv10

Hey author, I had read 300+ chapter. But still not identified who is main female.lead to get together with Jared. Hope you enlighten me.

Magecrafter:Thanks for your kind and honest reviews. I'm happy you enjoyed the read. I'll try my hardest to keep improving too! Once again, thank. I really appreciate this.
The_Soul_Wanderer
The_Soul_WandererLv2

Is this a harem?

Magecrafter:The guy in the cover
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

No

The_Soul_Wanderer:Is this a harem?
takemura
takemuraLv2

is this lgbt?

takemura
takemuraLv2

I'm at chapter 150 where the romance at?

takemura
takemuraLv2

so umm is this ince*t? i just saw chapter 300 or something like that and they way jared and his mother communicate makes it feel that way

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RafaelMitz
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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review. Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias. It’s a wonderful and interesting story. I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here. As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things. [Sp0iler Alert] *Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers* Firstly; The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally. Secondly; The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobility Thirdly; Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly; The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actions Lastly; The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review. Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be. That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character more He’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MC He behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this. Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic. The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standards But, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed. Answer 3: This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie. If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route. As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out. Answer 4: The MC is very smart. If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well. Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence. Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MC Unknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action. Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid. Answer 5: At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters. But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced. I certainly hope you enjoy this story. Cheers

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