RafaelMitz

thanks for the chapter

It would be interesting if this time it’s a foreign guild, haha. Thanks for the chapter.

It's a very interesting book with great world-building. The system isn't overly appealing with absurd rewards that turn the protagonist into a monster; it's something worth reading. If I had to point out a flaw, it's the harem construction... it feels forced. When the first girl showed feelings for the protagonist, he immediately thought about polygamy. I also can't imagine a girl like Elyra, with such a strong temperament and coming from such an important and powerful family, casually accepting the protagonist having other potential love interests (even if polygamy is normal in this world). The union of noble families is something too politically significant to be taken so lightly (especially when it comes to elves x humans). In my opinion, the author was rushed and careless in this part, hastily pushing the beautiful women toward the protagonist. The author should have built these relationships and feelings more carefully... but now it's too late. Sigh, this is a constant problem in works with harems... it's something hard to get right. I'll say again, it's a worthwhile read. It's a good work.

Let's go!!!

I'm not gonna lie, the insight reward was disappointing haha, I was expecting something more. Maybe it's something to keep the MC from becoming an unstoppable monster too soon. thanks for the chapter

I don’t know what the protagonist will do about Nam Sagwang, but I would decide not to add him to the team. He’s too unpredictable, dangerous, and it’ll be hard for the protagonist to outshine him if they’re on the same team. Thanks for the chapter.

That was exciting! Too bad there was no loot to grab in the end. Just imagining the possible loot... hehe, but the protagonist took first place and will buy the insight, so that's already awesome. Thanks for the chapter ^^

I'm not gonna lie, the plot armor in this chapter was a bit too strong hahaha It was a sequence of events so biased it’s hard to call it luck. The epic monster not attacking the protagonist with full force, despite sensing the serious threat of him constantly draining its celestial energy, was the most unbelievable part LOL. Anyway, I still had fun. Despite the critiques, I found it interesting. I just hope the author doesn’t overdo this stuff in the future haha. And wait, that counted as a monster elimination, right? Thanks for the chapter.

With a variable of this size, the chance of a 1st place is now possible for the MC. It’s something extremely difficult, but now there’s a real chance of winning using this epic monster. thanks for the chapter

I usually prefer a story with monogamy, but I think it's bad when the author makes several women fall in love with the MC only to discard them later. In other words, author, if you don't intend to write a harem/polygamy history, i suggest not making multiple female characters fall in love with the MC