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Adrian_Putra_3580
Adrian_Putra_3580Lv13yr
2022-01-10 19:37

So the MC not cautios or manipulative not doing something for only his benefit (something that typical Hero anime MC have )good guy (not neutral or evil)he is a hero(probely Will sacrife himself for his loved one,care about other people opinion,have amazing plot armor.)not my cup of a tea i like to read something that logical and a hero Will probely die if not because plot armor(because they care about other people and risking their live example just cacth the people that Hero care about and threathen him to kill hisself)it just my opinion don't get angry author. But good job author i love the idea but not the character.

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MynameJeff
MynameJeffAuthor

i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later

Adrian_Putra_3580
Adrian_Putra_3580Lv1

Thanks author just an opinion 👍

Victor_Venegas
Victor_VenegasLv2

Ufff it's just my favorite kind of mc thx

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
Pork
PorkLv12

then read any other story on this site

RuberX
RuberXLv4

i also love that but not to extreme.

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
MagicSand
MagicSandLv6

Sauce?

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
Unconscious_Truth1
Unconscious_Truth1Lv4

Oh awesome!! Just what I've been looking for!!

Charlie_Sowern
Charlie_SowernLv4

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

the majority of this app is filled with logical MCs and they are terrible stories. Sucks to have your taste in MCs.

SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

Oh please don't, seriously don't. Not with that kinda English.

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
Daoist7zS2pi
Daoist7zS2piLv1

B

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
BasedHaremDisliker
BasedHaremDislikerLv3

The grammar in this paragraph doesn't give me hope for this novel.

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
Zom_bloog
Zom_bloogLv3

Because they aren't actually logical, they give you the illusion that the mc is but most of the time they really aren't.

DetachedDreamer:the majority of this app is filled with logical MCs and they are terrible stories. Sucks to have your taste in MCs.
KingKarma_1766
KingKarma_1766Lv4

theres way too much Manipulative and Smart mc right now so I think imma gives this a try

Zero_Five_7869
Zero_Five_7869Lv4

Your a girl aren't you?

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

I like the personality you described but still I wanted harem or even a good love interest

lazyvampiredemonas
lazyvampiredemonasLv4

You do realize that most main characters has plot armors right. More so for the psychopathic mc’s. Also if your talking about realistic then practically all villains should have won already. Their brains are just usually fried against the maincharacters. In the real world no one wins, everyone loses and more so in a world with powers. Villains will drag each other down, there would be no heroes, and thus no story will be made. Without plot armor there is no plot as the mc would either still be looking for information, or the mc wouldn’t become rich as he would literally have to figh the whole world and it would be unlikely for them to stumble into any opportunities Cops would be more competent as well so there won’t be any perfect crime. There would be more people using their powers better as well… Plot armor is not an armor that protects the mc but an armor that protects the plot. Without it there won’t be plot therefore every character has plot armor. Pretty much it’s fate. The characters are bound by fate to fullfill and encounter events that wouldn’t be encountered even if you search for it. I’m not even sure why i wrote this now. It’s honestly pretty stupid for me to actually explain the concept that plot armor is only bad when it’s written badly.

Primo28
Primo28Lv5

naah wanting an evil type mc as q type is the one that sucks, don't delude yourself. reading it from time to time is fine but to actually think that evil mc type of taste is the norm is actually craaazzzyy

DetachedDreamer:the majority of this app is filled with logical MCs and they are terrible stories. Sucks to have your taste in MCs.
The_Ram_TS
The_Ram_TSLv3

I concur.

lazyvampiredemonas:You do realize that most main characters has plot armors right. More so for the psychopathic mc’s. Also if your talking about realistic then practically all villains should have won already. Their brains are just usually fried against the maincharacters. In the real world no one wins, everyone loses and more so in a world with powers. Villains will drag each other down, there would be no heroes, and thus no story will be made. Without plot armor there is no plot as the mc would either still be looking for information, or the mc wouldn’t become rich as he would literally have to figh the whole world and it would be unlikely for them to stumble into any opportunities Cops would be more competent as well so there won’t be any perfect crime. There would be more people using their powers better as well… Plot armor is not an armor that protects the mc but an armor that protects the plot. Without it there won’t be plot therefore every character has plot armor. Pretty much it’s fate. The characters are bound by fate to fullfill and encounter events that wouldn’t be encountered even if you search for it. I’m not even sure why i wrote this now. It’s honestly pretty stupid for me to actually explain the concept that plot armor is only bad when it’s written badly.
cardo_sinclair
cardo_sinclairLv13

I don’t mind the kind mc but it’s when you over do it like Japanese artist

MynameJeff:i know,its my personal preference to write this type of novel , my kind of mc is love and honestly cares about people,i think you will like that one novel in whic the guy is using chi in marvel and has a brush woth death,though he is also a goody two shoes,i will write a novel of your type sometimes later
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