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LENX
LENXLv43yr
2022-01-29 11:15

very boring and cringy, there are literally chapter's that just describes the mc watching TV and add to that the worst templates possible , 😑

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MynameJeff
MynameJeffAuthor

the watching Tv part was just mc realizing that he was being supportive,and if thats boring to you ,it means you are into fas paced novels and i cant do anything about that,as for template, bro its my decision what to use,the tag says that he is weak to strong you want me to give him goku,gilgamesh or some other powerful person,why even bother,

MonkeResurrection
MonkeResurrectionLv2

Why is his templates so weak against all marvel characters? It's like he's never gonna get stronger.

MynameJeff:the watching Tv part was just mc realizing that he was being supportive,and if thats boring to you ,it means you are into fas paced novels and i cant do anything about that,as for template, bro its my decision what to use,the tag says that he is weak to strong you want me to give him goku,gilgamesh or some other powerful person,why even bother,
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Bruh, currently on Chapter 150+ and the Mc by now is stronger than other Avengers, unless Thor gets full power of his divinity, Hulk gets 1000 times Angrier and Iron Man makes his Nano Suit, he is the strongest Avenger right now, stronger than Captain Marvel. And when the time comes for other characters power up he too will get a lot stronger by then and get bigger power ups, so he is getting Op which i like it. Don't listen to him Author Some people just give bad reviews without understanding anything about Novel. As an Author myself I know you are doing a great job😄

MonkeResurrection:Why is his templates so weak against all marvel characters? It's like he's never gonna get stronger.
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

About templates, all of them while not strong has great potential, Mc by now using his Cedric and Midoriya Template together is almost getting Reality Bending powers, and I know if this goes on he will get Reality Manipulation in the future

mow
mowLv4

The last part of your comment was dumb, the guy obviously reviewed months before it even reached that amount of chapters.

Akros_Zero:Bruh, currently on Chapter 150+ and the Mc by now is stronger than other Avengers, unless Thor gets full power of his divinity, Hulk gets 1000 times Angrier and Iron Man makes his Nano Suit, he is the strongest Avenger right now, stronger than Captain Marvel. And when the time comes for other characters power up he too will get a lot stronger by then and get bigger power ups, so he is getting Op which i like it. Don't listen to him Author Some people just give bad reviews without understanding anything about Novel. As an Author myself I know you are doing a great job😄
Yuinetro
YuinetroModerator

see op's other reviews, op gives 2-3 stars to most novels.

BoredDaemonGod
BoredDaemonGodLv4

well I bit dislike your mc template choice, i know that you don't want an mc OP from the start but it could be better like Cedric can be replaced by yuno or someone from black clover, midoriya can change to batman, zombieman or bang or someone from HxH. also I dislike deku power, his defect when using 100% of power is problematic

MynameJeff:the watching Tv part was just mc realizing that he was being supportive,and if thats boring to you ,it means you are into fas paced novels and i cant do anything about that,as for template, bro its my decision what to use,the tag says that he is weak to strong you want me to give him goku,gilgamesh or some other powerful person,why even bother,
Tony_snow_Snow
Tony_snow_SnowLv4

Bro what? Captain marvel is probably the strongest in the entire marvel verse even world breaker hulk doesn’t stand a chance

Akros_Zero:Bruh, currently on Chapter 150+ and the Mc by now is stronger than other Avengers, unless Thor gets full power of his divinity, Hulk gets 1000 times Angrier and Iron Man makes his Nano Suit, he is the strongest Avenger right now, stronger than Captain Marvel. And when the time comes for other characters power up he too will get a lot stronger by then and get bigger power ups, so he is getting Op which i like it. Don't listen to him Author Some people just give bad reviews without understanding anything about Novel. As an Author myself I know you are doing a great job😄
ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

Is this MC gonna stay just transforming into other people or will he gain power in his own body?

Akros_Zero:Bruh, currently on Chapter 150+ and the Mc by now is stronger than other Avengers, unless Thor gets full power of his divinity, Hulk gets 1000 times Angrier and Iron Man makes his Nano Suit, he is the strongest Avenger right now, stronger than Captain Marvel. And when the time comes for other characters power up he too will get a lot stronger by then and get bigger power ups, so he is getting Op which i like it. Don't listen to him Author Some people just give bad reviews without understanding anything about Novel. As an Author myself I know you are doing a great job😄
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

He will get his own power and won't need to transform again

ShamelessGengar:Is this MC gonna stay just transforming into other people or will he gain power in his own body?
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

That... did the story zero favors. What you've just told me is the mc is annoyingly weak at first, then ramps up with waaay too much power later. Leading to power creep. How about no to everyone else needing to get 1000 times more powerful just to stay relevant? No, no, and nope.

Akros_Zero:Bruh, currently on Chapter 150+ and the Mc by now is stronger than other Avengers, unless Thor gets full power of his divinity, Hulk gets 1000 times Angrier and Iron Man makes his Nano Suit, he is the strongest Avenger right now, stronger than Captain Marvel. And when the time comes for other characters power up he too will get a lot stronger by then and get bigger power ups, so he is getting Op which i like it. Don't listen to him Author Some people just give bad reviews without understanding anything about Novel. As an Author myself I know you are doing a great job😄
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Idiot template system works that way 🙄

Daoist_Dan:That... did the story zero favors. What you've just told me is the mc is annoyingly weak at first, then ramps up with waaay too much power later. Leading to power creep. How about no to everyone else needing to get 1000 times more powerful just to stay relevant? No, no, and nope.
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Yet he thought that Mc will get gilgamesh template in so less chapters

mow:The last part of your comment was dumb, the guy obviously reviewed months before it even reached that amount of chapters.
Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroLv4

Your illusion of considering a Hero strongest because he had been shown so due to plot makes me laugh. If plot support an idiot even then he can beat multiversal being something which had happened a lot of times in Marvel. Seriously, no wisdom at all.

Tony_snow_Snow:Bro what? Captain marvel is probably the strongest in the entire marvel verse even world breaker hulk doesn’t stand a chance
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Why should anybody care about your opinions on how stories work when you can't even correctly read someone's reply lol? Shut up and stop bugging people with your bs.

Akros_Zero:Idiot template system works that way 🙄
the_racist_one
the_racist_oneLv4

it's not about fast pace it's about u don't have anything to write so u add these useless scene i can understand

MynameJeff:the watching Tv part was just mc realizing that he was being supportive,and if thats boring to you ,it means you are into fas paced novels and i cant do anything about that,as for template, bro its my decision what to use,the tag says that he is weak to strong you want me to give him goku,gilgamesh or some other powerful person,why even bother,
the_racist_one
the_racist_oneLv4

but some got 5 star

Yuinetro:see op's other reviews, op gives 2-3 stars to most novels.
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