Victor_Venegas

It's just me or there's no paragraph separation?

Harem (but not with a lot of girls, at most 8, not more).

Hahahahah I knew it!!!

MARK MY WORDS!!!

Oh I know I'm right (there's yet the slightest possibility that is Paige aged up), this new girl it's Diane Adler from Gifted

Yes, word count, god like start and link for Patreon without having yet feedback, are the things that tell me a novel is going to fail miserably.

My way to the top it's slowly but steady.

White* Let's see how much time this review will last.

Not even two full chapters have passed and the MC is already disgusting, you can tell that the entire novel will only be 20ish chapters, there are only so many things that a "sigma" repressed in his parents' house can dream and therefore write. He does not ask himself why he is there (another world) and only sees the people around him with disgust, of course he has no moral compass, "that is for mortals and I am a lone wolf." Murder without any type of remorse (by the way the first person he kills is a black man, obviously) and a moment later he's looking in some mirror worried about whether he is still handsome (by the way the MC's eyes are OBVIOUSLY red and has a incredible wite skin). Why would he care about his appearance? If he has a dislike for the rest of the "mortals" unlike him, you could wonder, well OBVIOUSLY, the first female he finds, taking advantage of the situation (he rescued her only because at that moment he had bad luck, OBVIOUSLY he would not rescue a person, he is much higher than that, and now, that woman and her younger sister could die if he doesn't protect them), he forces her to have sexual relations with him, immediately ordering her to treat and call him a "master". I can imagine what the rest of the story will be like regarding any character that appears, women = se*ual objects obviously, men = threats to his position in the pack as alpha ($10 that the "author" has at least one photograph in his storage of wolf-themed motivation or a "businessman" Patrick Bateman). This is just the wet dream of a man in his mid-twenties, who never had any female contact other than his mother, and who dreams of having at least a little physical ability to be able to humiliate others and feel good about himself or attract (force if necessary) women to have "amazing" (p*rn based) s*x, but it is most likely that he is overweight, sad and does not take baths often, read if you meet the requirements.

So just to recap, in the previous chapter he only tells us that he is now in the body of a 15 year old boy, no family?, no memories?, just an apartment, he meets some guys, while training, bullying two people of 1.90 meters (in Korea) who, without knowing them and without even exchanging a word, recognize as skilled fighters and, for some reason, a master mind in business? Later, in one of the most robotic exchanges of dialogue I have ever read, he basically tells them "I adopted you as my workers because I am incredible, fear and respect me."