Victor_Venegas

It's only been 12 chapters, so I might change my mind in the future (I plan to keep reading to see where it goes). For now, I have to say that you can practically read the prompt used on ChatGPT to write this novel: "Write a badass, mysterious character who's dark and has an old-money vibe." What do you get? A robotic, bland, and not very interesting character. How do I know artificial intelligence was used to write this? It's generally hard to tell, unless the "author" is really bad at hiding it, but there are little things that show it. -Strange repetition in ideas and writing style. From chapter to chapter, there's constant repetition in certain parts of the story, for example, repeatedly saying that being excluded doesn't matter to him or the use of certain words, it's just strange. -Use of special characters, especially bold letters: it's very strange. I'd even go so far as to say it never happens that an author suddenly decides to use bold from one chapter to the next. I even reviewed the author's previous work and -surprisingly- there's not a single moment where the author use special characters. It may seem exaggerated to declare that the story is written with artificial intelligence just for those points, but the main thing is the feeling when reading. Aside from the main character, everyone, including secondary characters, feels robotic and soulless (despite being narrated by an omnipresent narrator). Aside from the description of the sensations and feelings that the characters "experience," as a reader, one doesn't empathize with any character, not even the protagonist. As I said, I plan to continue reading to see where the project goes; for now, this is the review.

I'll assume you're under pressure at school and that's why there's no chapter today, good luck.

Chinese authors trying not to glaze Chinese food

Hmm this seems oddly specific, do you have another novel in mind?

Man, if you're going to use GPT chat to write the story for you, at least have the decency to delete the parts where the AI ​​talks to you.

There is a little bit of story in your IA. No but being serious,the novel it's so rushed half the time you don't understand what's going on. Have you seen "Person of interest"? No? Not the novel problem here are all the characters from that show without any explanation.

I get that it's easier using a system to make some sort of "progretion" but what I don't get it's why do do it in a slice of life novel, what could possible happen fot the mc to be super human? In this chapter you gave the mc an infinite backpack, why? If you have everything then anything else becomes meaningless.

It's really sad to read this chapter, everything's natural, yeah right about now, no.

This started as a somehow enjoyable super star tycoon type of novel, a guy who sang and become famous, but right about now there's IA's, interdimentional beings, missiles hitting houses and a bunch of non connecting things forced to be connected. So the first hundred ish chapters are 7/10 Right now it's just a crack fic 2/10

Wait how's he going to take a dump???