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BoredDaemonGod
BoredDaemonGodLv42yr
2022-07-19 02:32

Alright I'm done with this, The amount of MC naivety and stupidity is astonishing. repeating bad decision & not properly planning. I can stand if you want MC have Hero personality but at least give him some brain. rescuing hostage without plan only to get ambushed and that is pretty often, trusting police too much (arresting villain only to get next week got out of prison). Also I don't like your choice of template, deku, Cedric diggory, Ikki kurogane? c'mon this is marvel and that is not MCU but mix with comics and villain there is so OP that can bend reality itself like apocalypse and thanos, and you giving him template of *weak character (based on marvel powerscale) especially deku & Ikki, you know that after they using their power their body get wrecked and that is fatal weakness in fight, at least give him 1 OP template that have not visible weakness. you did good with Madara though.

In Marvel with template system

MynameJeff
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386 Chs

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MynameJeff
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The OFA power arrived with izuku template and once he mastered it, he got rid of the body wrong king weakness. Cedric was right at the moment, had I introduced op character at the start, my story would have lost the element I was trying to give it. Madara was chosen by the people Thanks for the review

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pizzq
pizzqLv4

So the only good choice the author made, he didnt even make it himself. 🤣🤣🤣 yeah, thanks for the review! not reading this then.

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DaoistsLixYt
DaoistsLixYtLv4

Having a heroic protagonist is okay but stupid is not I’m sorry marvel and dc fans and myself included are tired of Spiderman and Batman nativity of no kill policy I’m sorry to burst ur fantasy but villain like the joker and the goblin need to be put down not apprehended to just escape from prison This type of plot work in comics only to not have creating new characters over and over and there is no way someone who have knowledge of our reality will spar those villains

MynameJeff:The OFA power arrived with izuku template and once he mastered it, he got rid of the body wrong king weakness. Cedric was right at the moment, had I introduced op character at the start, my story would have lost the element I was trying to give it. Madara was chosen by the people Thanks for the review
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