I wish to be a part of the undead
The story has potential, however the mc isn’t my type of guy. His indifferent, a bit lacking, and slightly too indifferent for my liking. But if your looking for that type of mc you might like the start. I’m not sure if her ever changed but give this story a chance.
I would have been really annoyed with you but since you already explained this isn’t yours in your bio i’m glad ypur showing this master piece to everyone
As expected this was good. It even feels like a different story from the first one. I love the attention to detail as well. It just adds that tad bit more to the life of icarus. We await for the beauty that is this story.
Not much plot but has a lot of funny interactions. Not bad at all. Not bad at all. I recommend this story to anyone willing to watch summaries of cultivation but also read a normal paced story
Pretty good read, not much plot but this story focuses more about exploring the world the mc is in and the abilities he has. Somewhat slowfaced but decent enough to read when bored and highly recommended.
I give it 5 out 5. it’s beginning was great. Thought as the time pass by the corruption of the system just made the story boring. From a person who was training hard and having a good cautious nature. He became a bit of a boring character. Ruthless. Emotionless and pretty much a pet of the system. Either way it’s been a good by time before leaving half way.
As a man who reads this at a constant. I can only be sure that stories would start become more meta as time goes by
To me that start was fine. Yes in isn’t following the fate verse lore as much but it’s pretty much filled with creative juices. For me I don’t really care about how the powers work since in the first place fate hasn’t really gone in-depth about it. Most are just fanon and it’s hard to distinguish sometimes. Love you’re story and lots of love
Gintama just pure come dy
A bit disappointed but also I understood that the mc isn’t much ready. still sad
You can do it one day
Thanks for you’re honesty
i do believe the author is trying to make a different experience. where the main character grows on his flaws but his kinda just dumb in his own way. for me at least being anti-social means not wanting to social meaning i have to know ways on how to not be social.