SageOfSins
"Live is an endless series of train-wrecks with brief, commercial-like breaks of happiness." -Wade W. Wilson Alignment- Lawful Evil, Faith- Xenophobia, Anti-Harem and a tad bit of Racism.
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SageOfSinsa day agoCommentedBrother, small mistakes in usage of pronouns. Could you fix that?
- SageOfSins2 days agoCommented
Nice introduction. But I still gotta ask, why the unnecessary use of the levitation spell and why does almost all of these HPverse fanfics goes on bizzare over use of levitation spells? Don't they know other spells or even if they do, don't they know how to cast spells silently, like even the most competent wizards and witches in these fictions seem incompetent through their uses of spell choices and how they cast those.
- SageOfSins4 days agoCommented
Brother, the constant mix up of pronouns is not a great sign for your works quality. I see you trying to advertise some other works you have going on patreon but if I were you, I would think less of those in cha-chings but focus more on quality control and minimise current workloads, focusing on 1-2 novels instead to have a more resounding product. Plus, this comment will get posted on your review.
- SageOfSins4 days agoReplied to Jayjayempi
Still not edited, it's been 16 hrs. 'A single action, instead of a hundred words.'
- SageOfSins6 months agoPosted
The raw story's appeal could be seen from just how popular this fic is, unfortunately this translater decides he rather half ass this wonderful story by simply running the RAW story through a basic Google translate and claim it as a back breaking hardwork. How disappointing.
- SageOfSins6 months agoCommented
The gradual decline in your translation leaves a bitter taste as the arc reach its finale and we have to scramble the meaning of your sentences. Please improve or edit some of it for the future readers.
- SageOfSins2 years agoCommented
At last!
- SageOfSins2 years agoPosted
Atleast have the decency to post actual chapters instead of hogging up the top spot. So fck off, come back with some actual story. Atleast have the decency to post actual chapters instead of hogging up the top spot. So fck off, come back with some actual story.
This book has been deleted. - SageOfSins2 years agoCommented
Small inconsistencies, like his height previously was said to be 175 cm but after two series it's been to 172... Is his father's name Benjamin button? Plus his CBSE score was 51% but its also been change to 57%..
- SageOfSins2 years agoCommented
Just from this scene alone I can tell the author is an avid fan of Bollywood or tollywood movies.