SageOfSins

Couldn't agree more! Two to three chapters to flesh out character is ok but 12 chapters just to run an errand. Like bro, Do you think your self Tolkien?

Unnecessary filler.

Please, don't indulge these sort comments. Most of better writers on WN are either bullied into writing useless chapters and plots just to satisfy some of these idiotic harem clans or anti-villian mania. Just do your own thing, no need to reply to every craven asking for attention. Write your plots regardless of what someone's demand, if your story is good eventually hundreds and thousands will naturally follow it, and based on these dozen of chapters, I believe you will get there faster than we both can predict. So good luck.

Et tu?

Nahh! Too much AI editting.

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Man, I would stay silent with such atrocity taste of reading choices. And you gotta ask someone if something is written by AI? And, you call me slow? Bruh!

The writing is great but after all this time, at the first instance of combat why isn't MC not thinking of using weapons? Or even hack-n-slash tactics with a 100kg+ slab of stone and ground. Seems idiotic to jump in unarm combat, instead of using distance based combat. I mean, it doesn't even need to be long range like bow and arrows, it could be a wooden pole or spear, or even a simple bat.

AI much?

Can't take a criticism, can you? Be the bigger man. Well, no use crying over spilled milk.