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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
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    my opinion is๐Ÿค”.the MC is smart(Even thought he doing something Dumb sometimes).logical(not logical enough their sometime his emotion cloud his judgement),now he still a goodguy(๐Ÿคฎ sorry my heart hurt when i type good guy i really hate it). author tell US that on the late chapter the MC Will become a antihero(๐Ÿ˜ this is good because the requirement to be the best anti Hero is first really selfish so no sacrife for love one Bu**t, really smart do not let emotion cloud is ability to think logicaly and do not doing something Dumb like a wannabe shonen MC who only a live because the mighty plot armor ๐Ÿคจ,that is the requirement for anti Hero but if author say some b***t that this is not and then make the MC stay as good guy then author is a lying coward๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ(don't be angry author but this is truth) but overall good fanfic author i hope you succes.and author DON'T BE A LIAR๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ™

  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
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    So the MC Will bring Amy to the next world?what the *ck.sorry can anyone tell me what the use of that.sorry maybe i little cold but why should you bought them a.k.a dead weight ๐Ÿค”.what the use of Amy she weak she do not have any ability(probably can be his weakness just kidnap her put some trap boom MC died)sorry if this harsh but it the truth.and when i think the MC logical and smart he become Shounen MC ๐Ÿ˜ค think with is d**k. Sorry if this harsh but this is my opinion i cannot think the use of bringing Amy except she get some Bulls**t power(๐Ÿ˜€) that can help the MC. But good job author this is just opinion who use brain๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿคฃ.i hope you succes

  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
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    This is my opinion don't be angry. I like the story at first because i like the MC characteristic 1.emontieles(good Because his emotion cant block him for using logic) 2.preety smart(can use his ability for his adventege) 3.neutral(it what i think at first ๐Ÿ˜€) But when the story progress MC is how i said it BECOME DUMB like a wanabe shonen MC. 1.he let his emotion block his ability to think logicaly๐Ÿ˜ค(so expect something that shonen mc Will do doing dumb s*it that can make them dead if not because the mighty plot armor.i don't why the MC doing something like this event thought he know that it Will make him Dead) 2.from always doing something with his brain to braindead๐Ÿคฎ 3.mc become a good guy(event thought not a wanabe Hero but close enough. So don't expect something smart and ruthless like yami(ho*y Joker)if you a fan of anti Hero smart MC. I don't tell you to not read it you can read it if you like it,this is just my opinion i like neutral/evil smart MC who Will not die very fast id not because the help of the mighty plot armor. ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ‘

  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
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    Thanks author.but why i have i feeling Hinata(dead weight) Will go with him to other world๐Ÿค”.it just a felling (5%).i really hope the MC not become Shounen MC who care about other and not selfish (๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿ˜‘).ok author please don't chage is personalty i don't mind of it just a act for his benifit(but if he only doing for emotional porpouse i Will be really disappointed๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ™„) But overall good chapter author.this is just an opinion ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
    Commented

    Thank you author i hope the MC still the same and only care about his own benefit and not because anime stupid shonen Hero MC๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. So author don't be a simp๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ™Œ

  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
    Commented

    Please author do not make romance the main attetion.it ruin good rational MC๐Ÿ‘

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
    Adrian_Putra_35803 years ago
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    Good MC think logical (i don't know in the future some author make MC from a logical person to a simp when they added female lead๐Ÿคจ)its good story' and from what i read this Will be multiverse travel i hope its good(what i hate with multiverse travel is when they take other people because she is preety and do not have anything useful if i am the mc the only thing i Will take is my pet at least they useful ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿค”) and i hope their Will be serious situation and not only comedy and i hope the MC only traveling alone it more exciting then bringing trash. This is just my opinion good job author๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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