Item: Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
Rating: 4
Author: SageOfSins

SageOfSinsLv33yr

2022-03-01 04:14

Nice story bro... But I don't know why, I can never seem to read past the first dozens of your chapters in all your fics. After some pages, something in my mind just says 'enough' and then I can't seem to enjoy the rest of fic anymore. Is it just me? I feel it is just me. Anyway seem to be progress toward a dope future plot based on first couple of chapters.

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

MisterImmortal

4.7

300 Chs

Liked by 28 people

Replies8

SageOfSinsLv3

Andi know someone is spam comment saying ' it is just you!' or something.

3yr

Thissmithy_MangaLv13

its not just you, this and grampa universe might as well have the same mc tbh and its always the same save the world and become super rich and everyone admires and loves me. which is OK at first but it gets kinda tiring after a while.

SageOfSins:Andi know someone is spam comment saying ' it is just you!' or something.

3yr

Cheese_curdlesLv4

I agree it does get a bit tiring if you've read all his oast fics but you gotta admit Immortal has some kind of banana drugs he uses to keep writing all these chapters with fairly good quality and consistency

Thissmithy_Manga:its not just you, this and grampa universe might as well have the same mc tbh and its always the same save the world and become super rich and everyone admires and loves me. which is OK at first but it gets kinda tiring after a while.

3yr

AeternabilisLv14

Same for me, I want some juice plot and conflicts but it seems that everything and anything goes the mc's way. He can play with the world as he wishes and nobody goes against it and everyone magically loves him for it. It's fine for one story if you are into "save" the whole world everything comes easy af etc like a wish-fulfillment story but if you want plots with conflict, other characters to have their own thoughts then this isn't for you. It's like the mc is the only one who can think about things and has an actual brain. Whilst the other characters are there to highlight how great the mc is...

3yr

Kais_ImperiumLv4

It's vanilla, I enjoy reading Gorilla's ff after reading something disturbing, tragic or some character I really cared about in a novel dies, his writing heals people which I love. I wouldn't recommend his ff to a newbie reader or someone who isn't looking for something to calm their mind.

3yr

StuckInTheInternetLv4

Who's gorilla and can you recommend on of their stories?

Kais_Imperium:It's vanilla, I enjoy reading Gorilla's ff after reading something disturbing, tragic or some character I really cared about in a novel dies, his writing heals people which I love. I wouldn't recommend his ff to a newbie reader or someone who isn't looking for something to calm their mind.

3yr

Casual_Reader09Lv3

Maybe it's because he tries too hard to make the story wholesome.

3yr

GrimgrimLv3

The author

StuckInTheInternet:Who's gorilla and can you recommend on of their stories?

3yr

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