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Yeah the meta knowledge being used like this is kinda peak. Hope she never gets the mini fruit either… takes the whole point of her being a giant and the reason why I wanted to read this in the first place..
Seems like it’s the same thing every game 😭
Why is he so obsessed with the wolves? Even form day 1 it seemed they where more important to him than his own life? If it made sense I could run with it, but it doesn’t…
Is becoming a let down tbh, the whole introduction into the royal guard has become a failure… He wants to rely on his own power? But that’s not the royal guard.. he’s been fine accepting all these other options why does it matter now? Mc seems to be just pure arrogance and a bit conceited. How has he even hidden the bit of magic that he converted? Should be blatantly obvious and stick out like a sore thumb. It would have been better if he didn’t join the royal guard at all and just stayed in soul society
Why is tch used every damn line…
+1 - for a rl fanfic using real characters (other than the oc ofc) is always better. As we know all the people it’s easy to sink in and really imagine, getting lost in the story. Having an oc fem lead is always a bit jarring and breaks the immersion
Ohhhh fair, that makes sense then. Marvel Is such a hard timeline to keep track of everything going on lol
I can’t remember the timeline all that well but shouldn’t the reality stone still be the liquid from with the dark elves? I get thanos shouldn’t be killed so early but if this was so, he shouldn’t have thought with the mc