Item: Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
Rating: 2.2
Author: ThePandaCritic

ThePandaCriticLv12yr

2022-06-15 09:48

Let's start off with the positives. The grammar is excellent. The story is somewhat unique in a way, in that it doesn't follow the whole cannon timeline wholesale but has its own twist. Now, these are the areas I don't like. First, this story has a ton load of history, like a lot which I guess if you're into that it's fun but for me, it was boring why because he's already op and most of the interaction was him beating them up so I skipped most of it. Secondly, the story is biased toward the Americans which was slightly annoying. Third, why make a character so op but the villains he faces so nerf, either he kills them off-screen or they fight him with no sort of expertise. For example, the ancient one, are you telling someone whose master of the ancient arts is defeated so easily like she didn't even investigate his being an anomaly. please she should at least give him a run for his money. By no means is the story great, is ok at best to me. If you have nothing to read and wanna kill some time but it becomes a drag after a while.

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

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ZhourongHephaestusLv13

so as you have already read this what's the opinion on romance part

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ThePandaCriticLv1

ZhourongHephaestus:so as you have already read this what's the opinion on romance part

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ZhourongHephaestusLv13

I was serious abt the question but never mind that dogs are good boys

ThePandaCritic:
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but he is an omniversal god, tf would a universal mage do to him???

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